| "Irksome Nature" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 23:20 CDT
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Alright, I know I've probably reviewed more that enough for a single reader, but I just had to do it again, because I didn't feel I really said enough in that last one. Since your last update I must have re-read this fic five or ten times. I'm just hooked. Something about your writing has just captured my attention and refuses to let it go. And this story does great things for my imagination, and no I don't mean that in a perverted sense. I have so many favourite lines I won't even begin to start listing them off. I love Kaiba's personality; cocky, yet debonair. And I still love the flashbacks. (So cute) I have fun picturing the scenes. I love reading this story and I'm so grateful for your dedication to it. I just wanted to say that.
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 19:46 CDT
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Yes!! Great. Loved it! Thanks for updating! I'm looking forward to another chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 21:15 CDT
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Oh, I definitely enjoyed that one! It was... don't know. I want to say cute, but that just doesn't seem the right word. It was good, though, and I was certainly very glad to see an update here. Thank you very much!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 07:22 CDT
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Another great chapter and another precious Seth and Atem scene. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:27 CDT
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I'm going to review again just for the hell of it...well, here you go!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice touch with having Seto trying to teach Yami how to use a phone. Hilarious!!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 07:19 CDT
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Very good. You've done a good job with the Kaiba narritive. Loved the Seth and baby Atem scene.
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:20 CDT
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*looks into crystal ball* Do I foresee an update in the near future??
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 19:11 CST
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Need another update! The time has come!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!! I especially liked the part that says "Once my mind was made, nothing could change it. Nothing except for an annoying ghost and his shorter and livelier clone." It's funny! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 08:01 CST
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I can't believe that you're an amateur author. I this story is so wonderful and I absolutely love the way you've written Kaiba. He's amusingly witty. Ah this is a great story. The relationship between Kaiba and Yami is also very entertaining and I totally wasn't expecting that suggestion from Yuugi. Great idea though and nice way to get Yami into the mansion. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 20:29 CST
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When are you gonna UPDATE?????!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! I like how it captures Kaiba's love for his little brother. It actually like seeing a bit of Seto's mind. Good ideas, good writing.
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Reviewed By: Silentsigh On: January 19, 2004 10:01 CST
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You're a much better writer than most of the other people here. This is probably the best fanfic I've read in a long time. I hope the next chapter is just as good as the first.
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Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! This seems like a neat lil' fic. I really want to see what you do with it. It's very well written and I think you do a great job capturing Kaiba's personality, especially considering this is your first time doing first person. I loved the "Pharaoh of the blah, blah, blah," comment and heck it was all good. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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