| "Irksome Nature" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 13:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, hello! Great update as usual. Only problem I had with it was the mistake with my name, "phoenixfire7". But then again, I don't really care. The excellent chapter made up for it. No worries! :D
|
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 07:00 CST
Comment/Review:
So happy for the update. Love the way you do Seto's inner dialog and the flashback was once again excellant.Atem is so cute.
|
Title: I like this.
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: January 06, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I had more energy, I'd give a fuller and more detailed review. As it is, I just read this thing from the beginning--no I wasn't following along all this time, though I do have you on my favorites alert--and have to say I'm too tired to think straight enough to say anything coherent. But I'll try. Everyone has made one mention or another about your characterizations of all the players--I'll agree that you've done a fine job on keeping them believably IC. Also, I think the--not-relationship is it?--is progressing nicely, not too fast. The dreams are a nice touch, and add the rational behind the bonding. Also, I find manipulative Mokie cute and manipulative Yuugi . . . satisfying, strangely enough--not many people spin him that way. All that said, this story has a superb balance of layers. Which might be your undoing. Bluntly, I see no way for you to end this in just one chapter unless it's the--minimum--size of two. This story is too engrossing to end like that, even is the rating isn't going to go up to NC-17. It would be like, walking halfway out into a river, and stopping dead before you touch the other bank. An yet, this is your story to do with as you will. I'll just patiently watch from the shadows as you carry on. Good Luck!
|
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* I am so behind...reading fanfiction, I mean. I have yet to read stories that have posted four chapters since I read them last. Anyway, the most recent chapter was great as always. Ta-ta!!!
|
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter. Loved the Yugi and Mokuba scheming and Yami's fascination with infomercials was very funny( loved him asking Seto about his abs!). Looking forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: PyroDragon117 On: November 18, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. This was the one of the top ten stories I have ever read. It's original, and creative AND has nice, long chapter. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT- *A million years later* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVEE IT I LOVE IT.... *Keeps going on like that forever* ^___________^
|
Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! Go seto! I wonder what'll happen next? Can't wait to see another chapter!
|
Reviewed By: Dark Wind On: November 13, 2004 12:22 CST
Comment/Review:
*claps hands happily* An update!! Yay! I love how Yami and Seto interact. I can't wait to see where you take this!! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 08:41 CST
Comment/Review:
So glad for the update. Hoping for another update soon. Story is moving along nicely. Love the Seto POV.
|
Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I really love this story!! You keep Seto in such good perspective! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
|
Title: update!
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon!
|
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 00:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved the fight over the pink abominations and Mokuba's advice on relationships. A pouting Atem would definetely be a thing to avoid. Looking forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 (not logged in) On: August 12, 2004 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Never thought Kaiba would wear slippers, especially pink fluffy ones...scares me; but it's funny anyway!! Thanks for updating, it was worth the wait. Update again soon!!!
|
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh thank you for the update. I liked this chapter though it wasn't my favourite. I don't have any particular reason as to why. Is it just me or are the arguments between Yami and Seto getting pettier? It's still all kinds of cute, but petty. I'm still having fun trying to figure out where exactly the story's going to go, that is what I enjoy. I'm just happy when you add some more, so keep going please. I love that you're taking your time to develop the storyline slowly. I don't mind the wait because I know what you're going to give me will be gold!
|
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 10:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a sweet chapter. I loved the little dream sequence and that Seto finally remembered somthing. I hope he remembers some more soon. I really like the idea behind this. It's like Seth and Atem had a similar relationship to the one that Seto and Mokuba share; until things went sour that is. It makes me wonder if that kind of foreshadows the Kaiba brothers' relationship. This is what I mean when I say this fic does great things for my imagination. My brain can go off on all kinds of great story tangents. I love it! Thanks for another update. It was great. ^^
|
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
