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| "Irksome Nature" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! I like how it captures Kaiba's love for his little brother. It actually like seeing a bit of Seto's mind. Good ideas, good writing.
| Reviewed By: Silentsigh On: January 19, 2004 10:01 CST
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You're a much better writer than most of the other people here. This is probably the best fanfic I've read in a long time. I hope the next chapter is just as good as the first.
| Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! This seems like a neat lil' fic. I really want to see what you do with it. It's very well written and I think you do a great job capturing Kaiba's personality, especially considering this is your first time doing first person. I loved the "Pharaoh of the blah, blah, blah," comment and heck it was all good. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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