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Reviewed By: Mis trissy On: February 01, 2004 23:17 CST
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PUT JAKEN IN!!!!!
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Reviewed By: twinkietheperv On: February 01, 2004 23:15 CST
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i guess two people are gonna have them selves a little somtin somtin, if u get wat i mean^-^
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Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:34 CST
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thanks so much for not hating me. I totally understand and all that... yeah, i wanted Kagome to seem a little more daring in this fic, and not as sissy... hmmm
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Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:33 CST
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hjgd
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sorry for blowing up like that. Everyone makes mistakes, including me. I could've been a bit nicer. Hope you can forgive me. No, I don't hate you. Is Inuyasha always late for class? :p I can't really picture Kagome skipping class but hey she does it in the series doesn't she?(And for a goood reason. Anyways...I hope you can update soon. ~Ciao, Dreaming_girl
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Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 17:42 CST
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Okay, i edited my chappy, sorry... i'm such a ditz sometimes, anyways, sorry if you got all confused, my fault. God, you probably hate me now...>.
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Title: physcho
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 17:37 CST
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Sorry, i must have udated using my other story. Geez, i'm such a nutbrain right now. So sorry about that. I'll fix it right away, just have to finish cleaning my cat's litter box first...pew
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_girl(not logged in) On: February 01, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...Where the hell did "Maeka" come in? You never said anything about her. What about "Sesshoumaru"? You didn't bring him in either. I'm lost. Go SLOWLY, put in a FILLER CHAPTER-it's where you introduce characters. You can't just say that Maeka is Inuyasha's girlfriend and that Kikyou despises her. Kikyou, or as I have seen you portray her, is still heartbroken over Inuyasha and can't bring herself to talk about him. Now she's stalking him? And out of no where Sesshoumaru comes in. I don't remember you introducing him to Kagome so how does she know his name? Please explain this to me. ~Ciao
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Reviewed By: physcho On: February 01, 2004 11:28 CST
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okay, need to see my reviews, this is getting really annoying!!!
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Reviewed By: Vampire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot, i cant wait for chapter 4. well i guess thats all their is to say. oh yeah UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: psycho(not logged in...durr) On: January 30, 2004 21:19 CST
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I'm so happy!!! more review already!!! Yippee!!!
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Reviewed By: kat21 On: January 30, 2004 20:33 CST
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coolie.....likin the fic......please update! thnx
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Reviewed By: nightingail of the forest On: January 27, 2004 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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pretty cool! i cant wait for chapter 3! please update!
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Reviewed By: Author(not logged in) On: January 20, 2004 21:14 CST
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Thanks for the review. Be patient! it's only th first chapter, don't worry though, this story will go pretty fast. Please read my other story 'Demon Song' If you like this one though!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're beating around the bush here. Get to the plot! I like what you have so far but it's going pretty slow. Anyways update soon.
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