Reviewed By: Sangsue On: January 26, 2004 19:37 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this pairing so I really enjoyed this fic. I wish it'd gone further, maybe you'll write another fic where it does? The only criticism I have is the punctuation and grammar. I enjoyed the story but it'd have been even better if the story had been beta'd before it was posted. Great job over all, though.
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