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"Lunch Break" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: ffpanda [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2005 07:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Sweet and cute and hot! They SHOULD do that again. And again! And AGAIN!!!
 Reviewed By: Sangsue  On: January 26, 2004 19:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this pairing so I really enjoyed this fic. I wish it'd gone further, maybe you'll write another fic where it does? The only criticism I have is the punctuation and grammar. I enjoyed the story but it'd have been even better if the story had been beta'd before it was posted. Great job over all, though.

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