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Reviewed By: TheShadowInTheMirror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 03:11 CST
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My God, it's been so long since I've checked up on this story! Well, I've been a busy girl. Now I'm back on track, so I'd better catch up on Kat's journey! I'll review again after I'm done reading what needs to be read (did that even make sense?).
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Title: Live Journal
Reviewed By: catbeastaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 13:10 CDT
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In response to "Its ME!!!!!" and other questions you may have in regards to the Live Journal account I'm using and why, please copy and paste the webaddress: http://catbeastaisha.livejournal.com/4143.html to your address bar. That will take you to the entry specifically answering (or trying to answer) this question.
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Reviewed By: Its ME!!!!! On: October 26, 2006 02:45 CDT
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How do you get into this book in your live journel acount!?
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Title: Wow, you started again!?
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee, it must have been a long time since I entered this net... The story is simply magnificent and extrodinary in its own way. The plot is still not quite clear (well, you have only written few chapters uptil now *Sweet drop*), but some parts of it are so different from the former counter aprt, the two boys they meet especially. But I see now why you re-wrote it, but I still thought the first story line of it was brilliant. Just continue, it does not matter if it is in a slow pace, I just like reading it and learning from it myself (especially since I have to look up some words in the dictonary *head falls in shame*), I absolutely love the way everything is so well thought out and described, so have fun in re-doing it and pasting it back to MM.org, good luck with it in additional.
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Reviewed By: This is how it goes... On: August 15, 2006 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue!!!!! i think raichel should get a Yammna there so cool!!!
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Reviewed By: DeathPidgy On: August 15, 2006 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Con-tin-ue!!! Please Con-tin-ue!!!continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tyhone On: August 14, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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20/10 wow thats good love the storie please continue.Great Chapters Perfact storie Your the best wrighter i'v seen or read so far!
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Reviewed By: TheShadowInTheMirror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, well done! God, it's like I have this weird fetish with Totodile's... Anyways, I look foward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: LMAO On: June 26, 2006 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Chapter was so funny! And as much of a Water-type lover I am (Chomper), I find my simply adoring Surfer! Hope you update soon!
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Title: Thank God!
Reviewed By: TheShadowInTheMirror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you re-did and re-posted your story! Though it took a while, it was worth the wait. The first chapter for "The Journey Onward" was much better than the first chapter to "Kathryn's Pokemon Journey". A real improvement! I hope you update soon. Thanks for not leaving a fan in the dust. P.S: Thanks so much for reviewing my story! Though, I hate the first two chapters... I'll probably end up re-doing those. Till next time!
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Reviewed By: TheShadowInTheMirror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. A LOT. But I gotta question... are Kathryn and Krissy truly interested in eachother romantically? That puzzled me as much as Rachel (I love Rachel... she's my favorite character!). I don't have anything against the pair, I enjoy thier arguments to its full extent :D, but I'm leaning more towards a Brandon/Kathryn thing to happen. I'm fond of rival trainers pairing. *gets flustered* Well, either way, great story! Hope you update soon!
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Title: -.-;
Reviewed By: Shinsetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...it cut my post. I tried to say that this was the best damned Pokémon fic I've read in a long time and that I love how you created the communication between Kathryn and the Pokémon. Reminds me kinda like how Stewie from Family Guy is always speaking, but the only one who notices and listens is the dog. X3 Oh, and that I wholeheartedly hope you continue this story, because it's awesome.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Shinsetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Homg, you wouldn't believe how many times I've tried so hard to post a review! Stupid MM logging me off. >
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Reviewed By: Lady Mana (forgot to log in) On: July 27, 2005 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one great stpry! One of the best written original Pokemon Stories ever. AT last that's my opinion. I especially love the interaction between humans and Pokemon. i think it was cool how Nashley evolved into Houndoom, that's one of my fav. Pokemon. Anyways, i hope you update again and i hope you contniue having fun writing this story like i enjoyed reading it! hehe...well, bye! ~Lady Mana PS. i also liked the development of your three characters!
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Title: Wonderful, marvelous and exciting!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly enjoyed that chapter! I wonder if Kathrin heard the Pokemon speak? It reallz nearly sounds like it, or was it different kind of creature that helped her out as she woas uncioucess (sorry for the spelling)? It did give me to think actually and I hope you Update soon! THanks though for not giving up in ths story! It is really amazing I think ^-^!
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