| "Knowing" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 21, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is great but is that the end I couldent tell? I like the story..
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 21, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter ..We just need to keep going...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 21, 2004 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story keep going with it...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 20, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write a sequel or an epilogue to let us know what happened to the preventers. To let us know what happen with the other pilots? What was Relena's reaction to Heero's death? and how and what Duo and Heero are doing with their new life?
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, very good. So, are they going to tell the other pilots that they still live? I would sooo love the see what Quarte is going to do after he got the letter from Duo. Are you going to write an epilogue about that? Yes? Please, or at least the funeral or something like that.
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