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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what are you!!! the goddess of lemons or something!!!!! anyway I liked it and I hope you'll update soon
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Reviewed By: YaoiAnimeGurlLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny! I wonder what else Yami is going to do to Yugi. *thinks dirty thoughts* Oh well only one way to find out Please update!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!.........*Suffering after effects of Yaoi/lemony godness*.....*Drool*..That..was AWESOME!!! My god, I loved that so much! It was funny and sooooo hot! Yugi sure can be evil at times, huh? ^^ And poor Yami, but in the end he also got his payback on his little naughty Hikari. XD This was super and I highly enjoyed it, It was just a little hard to understand in a few spots though, but otherwise it was PERFECT! YUGI AND YAMI FOREVER!!!^^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 10:06 CDT
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Yum... midget love action!:-D Only wish it had been longer.
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Title: Thanks For The Visits
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Just gotta say thanks for all the visits that this Fic has gotten.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:20 CDT
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Yum. Very yummy. Poor Yami, it's not his fault he walked in at the wrong time. Update soon, I can't wait to see the Yami punishing Yugi.^-^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 12:47 CDT
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Yay, you finally updated! I don't think this needs a sequel, but 'Anything to Protect You' might. Yay, two lemons. Now what's Yami gonna do to Yugi? Update soon!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 20:11 CDT
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OOC is out of character. Please update soon!
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Title: Thanks and Sequels perhaps?
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 22:25 CDT
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This is just to say thank you too all the people who read and reviewed my stories. I recentlyu moved back, home from college so I havent really had the time to write anymore( *sigh*) actually my family would freak if they saw my Yaio fics lol. Though these were the first I ever wrote,lol I just wanted to try something different too see if I could do it. Its kinda funny when your trying to think in character of a guy liking a guy when your a girl who likes guys, but I figured it was the same thing. Now Im thinking whether or not to do a sequel to Anything to Protect you or TimeOut( though I dont know when that will be)I guess I could add another chapter to TimeOut perhaps dont know yet lol. Or maybe I'll start something new,. Anyways Thanks again.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol great job on the lemons! plz update soon! what is time out going to be like 4 Ygui?
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 13:49 CST
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That was evil... Write more, write more!
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Reviewed By: Too lazy to log in:p On: March 08, 2004 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay, the style is kinda hard to read, but his is really good! And I can't say that I hate cliffies, since I do themall the time anyway. Just please, PLEASE write more ok?
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Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! not a cliffie!!!! how evil can you be?! well, anywayz, I really likies this so far so please please please PLEASE update soon, kay?
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Title: What In the world is OOC?
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 03:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry but whats OOC? Can someone explain that to me?
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Title: The spelling errors.
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 03:36 CST
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Okay I got some complaints about the spelling errors so um I guess spell check isnt working right lol. But I would appreciate it if whoever doesnt like that if they could tell me exactly what was misspelled. I try to catch all my errors but unfortunately thats not always the case. Though Im guessing it has nothing to do with the fact that I say Yess instead of Yes for instance( that's done on purpose). As are all the Ums. Thanks for the reviews, keep em coming,and thanks for pointing that stuff out. Just please be more specific.
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