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Title: wow
Reviewed By: yamimylove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic, but sometimes it becames a bit confusing, maybe by the mispelled words, um one question how do you say love you in japenese? Ashiteru or Aisertiou?
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Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I gave you an eight for style of writing because, although the story is good, it gets confusing with the way you write it. Spelling & grammar gets a six because I found numerous mistakes, and that sort of thing REALLY annoys me. I gave you a ten for originality/creativity because I've never read a story quite like this one. I gave an eight for the enjoyment factor because it gets a bit boring, especially when you drone on endlessly without any real direction. Finally, i give you an eight for the overall rating, because it is the average of the other ratings. Soooooo..... the story is pretty good, though several of the characters are OOC. Oh well... I guess it really doesn't matter. This is getting kinda long, so I think I'll just shut up now (I'm sure you'd like that). Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Aisoku Jou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Somehow. . .I just can't picture Yami acting like that. . lol ~Update soon!!~
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Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness, short chapters eh? I think I'm contagious! usually I write short chapters! oh well, it was funny. well...I guess if Yami wanted to make yugi squirm that's the way to do it! well, update soon, kay?
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Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 20:29 CST
Comment/Review:
oh, that was too funny! the pharaoh is acting like ME when i don't get my way! aahhhh!!!! anywayz, update soon, kay? cuz i'm REALLY liking this fic.
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woulda given it 10 outa 10 for all of the ratings, but it's VERY hard for me to give 10s, so yeah....lol, the yugioh cereal! Poor bakura! *hands him the REAL millennium Puzzle which was stolen from Yami* Yeah, well anyway, really funny and sweet and time outs are evil! please update soon, kay?
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is awsome you have to keep writing it!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Bara no Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the story so far but I Jou's name is spelled Jounouchi (just trying to help) Please continue ^.^
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Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 22, 2004 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaze continue!!!
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