| "Anger plus hormones = yaoi" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Good
Reviewed By: Lord_InuYasha24 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left off the first word in every line. Very hott though. Liked the blood scene. Good
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Lord_InuYasha24 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left off the first word in every line. Very hott though. Liked the red blood scene. Good
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haibara3, you can never have too much Yaoi! Anywayz, it was a little hard to understand because some of the words were missing, but it was good!
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Title: just so ya know
Reviewed By: lissete On: March 04, 2004 08:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I think something is wrong with your word procceser or somthing cause everything has been moved over.
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Reviewed By: Moan my name the hentai On: February 28, 2004 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Man! Lots of missin' words, but good! Love the pairing.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 21:43 CST
Comment/Review:
*snickers* Oh yeah, first they punch each other and then they end up taking each other in the backseat. I was slightly confused by the missing words, but that's ok. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like they said, there were words missing, but I liked it. Very nice PWP.
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Reviewed By: Pyro Princess On: February 19, 2004 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Very very good. but the first word in every paragraph was missing but it wasn't too hard to figre out what they were. other than that i throughly enjoy your fic! ^-^
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Title: Missing but good!
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK Broken_Rose to be honest your fic was a little to much Yaoi and little plot but it wasn't bad. I'm not really good with cars but I think I'll have to agree with DJ. I'm not sure If it's my computer, MediaMiner, uploading problems or just you forgot to write them down. I found the first word of each paragraph missing. Anyway its a great fic. I really hope you write a sequel or if not another great fic.
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 16:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Good God
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Reviewed By: JD On: January 23, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Porsche? All that happened in the car? Ya. Right. Have you ever been in a Porsche?
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Reviewed By: dancer of the light and darkness On: January 22, 2004 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
With only a few mistakes that I think were probably because of mediaminer's downloading program, it's a pretty good story.
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