| "Sesshoumaru’s Love and Kagome’s Aid:" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was sweet. I LOVED IT! I hope you write more. The story was excellent! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Siri On: May 04, 2005 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Who will help him keep the woman he loves?" That's pretty obvious from the title, isn't it? ;-) The quotes in boldface are kind of distracting. And the few 'dirty' words seem out of place. Nonetheless, it's a great fic! I love it, particularly these lines: "The moon had disappeared and the shadow hour of the night had come, the perpetual silence just before the sun slowly lit the sky. He paused and listened, hearing only his heartbeat quicken as he thought of Rin." Very nice!
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Reviewed By: sesshorin On: February 23, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very lovely story! Nice image of Sesshomaru shedding a tear at Jaken's death and cutting his name onto a tree. The setting is very romantic, with Sesshomaru and Rin living in the wild, just the two of them. Nice description of him having stripes on his body, I never thought of that. Hope you write more Sessh&Rin stories.
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Reviewed By: marnika On: January 23, 2004 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love Sesshomaru and Rin stories hope you write more.Oh well for Jaken!Don't have that little toad to kick around any more.
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Reviewed By: Victor Razador [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the pairing, its good... but why did jaken have to die? =( oh well other than jaken dying, i liked it a lot- i hope to read more sess/rin fics from you- good job!
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Reviewed By: Lease [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice oneshot, I love this pairing. Hope to read more from you!
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