| "White Flag" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story! i've read it a few times now and i still think its great! keep writing...i wouldnt mind more background to the fight or how they got together in the first place or maybe even the other characters' relationship
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Reviewed By: Crazykatgrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh. yummy... the song you used fits nicely with the rest of the fic... Schu/Yohji smut is good, and it had a nice plot!! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: deunank On: March 19, 2004 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyed highly! I would have liked to know the reason for their argument. Not that it is special or anything, but it would make the story more real to me. A little deeper characterization of both of them.
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Reviewed By: mon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 03:39 CST
Comment/Review:
wheee.. i like S/Y lemon ^_^ heheheheeeee
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