| "Deadly Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: that was hot!!!!!
Reviewed By: isseixjinpachi_shonen-ailover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very sexy. hope you keep writing!^-^
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Reviewed By: idiganime On: September 20, 2005 03:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
HOLY F@*K!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wesrt On: September 08, 2005 08:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww... This is so sad... You also have this story on www.fanfiction.net right? How come you never update that? I don't suppose you could revive Tooya and sorta make him come back from the dead? Please do it... I feel like I going to cry already...
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Reviewed By: ayno On: August 07, 2005 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's Alec Howell, not Mikage. Anyway your story was nice. Is it the same one as the deadly desires in fanfiction.net? Please update soon!!!
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Title: deadly desires
Reviewed By: Ryya On: June 29, 2005 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. it's been such a long time since you've updated, i thought you'd forgotten. my computer's been down lately, so i haven't read it til now and. dude. this story is wrong in a million and one ways. and it just keeps getting better. can't wait til you guys update again! x]
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Title: Welcome Back!
Reviewed By: WhisperingMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I thought you'd never update this story, it's been so long. You haven't lost your touch in writing it either. I still love it and I wait for more!
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Reviewed By: HauntedReality (not logged in) On: May 29, 2005 21:15 CDT
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Wow! That chapter was about a thousand shades of wrong, and each one was hotter than the one before it! Oh Aki, how could you? Now, keep doing it!
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Reviewed By: HauntedReality [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 20:41 CDT
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Just finished the first chapter and good times abound. It is good to see a world in which Aki didn't die because I think that was the saddest thing about the anime. And there were plenty of things to be sad about in this particular one! Still, he isn't out of the woods, or out of the shadow of the original Mikage at least. Now, on to chapter 2!
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Title: deadly desire
Reviewed By: icy3 On: May 29, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story even though it sick of Aki to love his sister like that but hey it ur story and since it base on the manga the story is okay. Update more of this story
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: anthea18 On: April 11, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your work!, pls, update it very soon???!! ^_^
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Elie Rockz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 07:52 CST
Comment/Review:
That was great man! Hope you continue!!!! Please Im begging you Im thirsty for more akiXaya scenes and lemons!
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Reviewed By: silly On: January 19, 2005 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very gooood!!!please finnish the story.have yall just quit.don't do that cause the plot is very good good good.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Danyu On: November 21, 2004 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best Ayashi no Ceres fics I've ever read. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: AnnaLaura On: October 07, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story you are writing is incredible! I'm at the edge of my seat at just about all times and I can't wait to see more of you work. Please, do update soon! ~Anna
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Title: Deady Disire
Reviewed By: Cherryblossom3 On: August 21, 2004 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very great story . keep up the great work and update more
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