| "Two Simple Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: orangeaura868 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Wonderful plot...I liked the way you write and have certain places for each thing and the way things meet up. I can't wait to find out what happens! Please update soon...I LOVE your writing! Your a good author! It does seem a little fast-paced...but it's still good...the 3 month time jump sorta got me all riled up...lik...OMG!!! What happened!!! Anyway...can't wait till you write more...Bakura seems prankish evil with cruel intentions and Seto warmed up instantly to Ryou...I thinkRyou was pretty well-written though... Anyway...Continue your excellancy!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated since May and I was wondering if you were going to continue this or not. I really hope you do it seems like a nice story, but right now I can't see Bakura lying to get Ryou just yet... But all is possible. Bakura a demon and Ryou an angel... what's new they're complete opposites of one another. Why did Seto invite Ryou over? Because he pittied him? Update soon!!! Until then!!!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: May 10, 2004 17:31 CDT
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Awww, poor Seto. Woah, Bakura is MAJORLY obsessed.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl not logged in On: May 10, 2004 07:10 CDT
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please update, I love the plot twist! B/R YES!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 23:12 CDT
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Intersting. I'm liking this. ^_^ Ud soon. Ja ne.
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Title: kitty bakura
Reviewed By: shadow ryou On: March 11, 2004 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit this. I thought it was great. I must read the next chappie.Keep up the good work.^_^
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Reviewed By: chaos911 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 20:29 CST
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this is realy good..please update realy soon
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 10, 2004 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty please!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 09, 2004 21:56 CST
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you have got to update!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful start to what promises to be a wonderful story!!!! Please hurry and update :)
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Reviewed By: Nine Tailed Fox On: January 21, 2004 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Huge Begging Chibi Eyes* Please, please, update! You've got us all in suspense of your next chapter! I can't wait!
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