| "Forever and Always" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Really cool story. I had an idea at about chapter 3 that Yugi was not fully human. It was really well done. I like the cliffys in each chapter. There were a few grammar mistakes in the story, but otherwise, it was really well detailed. I hope you will continue it soon. ^_^ Keep up the aweseom work.
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Reviewed By: kristen89(not logged in) On: June 21, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww!!! That's so cute how yami comforts yugi and all. I had no idea that that was Yugi's secret. Yugi's parents were so mean to abuse him like that!!! You must keep writing i must know more!!! what did Yami realize at the end? Please keep up the good work!! ^_^ ~Kristy
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh cliffie please write more and dont let it be so long this time it was great.
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooo good and very suspenseful chappie!! please add more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SFoxZone On: March 06, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Add ch. 5 NOW!
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goish you updated!!! ::spaz:: I freaked out when I got the e-mail saying you added a chappie!! meepp!! well..Great chappie, continue soon. Chau! Emily
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 08, 2004 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
a really good fic, with a cliffie! Let me know! What is wrong, and isn't Bakura a sweetie?
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Title: FairysGift
Reviewed By: FairysGift [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad but it still needs abit of fixing on the style of writing and especially the spelling and grammer part of it. Apart from them your story is excellent. well done.
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Title: your awesomely awesome story, Forever and Always
Reviewed By: nikalu On: January 30, 2004 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this Fanfic rocks. it's really exciting!!!! i mean wow! where did u come up with this awesome story? it should be made into an episode. especially since it explains what happened to Yugi's parents. i always windered that. and if it was aired, your explanation would make sence. so hurry and finish the story so i can find out what happened and that way, i won't die of anticipation. one more thing, YOU RULE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart9 On: January 30, 2004 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The story itself is good. You need to work on grammar. For example, "of" and "have" aren't interchangable. "You would have lost puppy." not "You would of lost puppy." It can jar the reader out of a wonderful story if there are too many mistakes likes that. Also, putting author notes into the story can be jarring too. With a wonderful story like this, the fewer the distractions the better. So if you didn't want to write about P.E. simply say, "After his 5th period P.E. class, Yugi..."
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 15:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Heres whats going to happen- you have to update right...now!! omg i love this story, i've been reading it but not reveiwing...(sorry lol) And I just felt like i need to now, since almost nobody it! Whats WRONG with you people? This story is awesome!! lmao! Well please continue as soon as possible, (since a great Yugi fan, I NEED to know what happens!) hehe!! At the end, you noted that it was undetailed and boring--wrong! It wasnt boring at all, and considering the end it was far from it...great cliffy!!! And undetailed- I myself think it was great as it was, and detailed enough. CONTINUE!!! CHAU!~ Emily
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 14:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it! please write more i have to know whats bothering yugi! Please!!
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Reviewed By: TrueKhaos On: January 24, 2004 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. i wanna continue reading this, so by all means keep writing
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Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Continue.. I want to know what Yugi's secret though Im hoping its not the secret that most everyone uses as Yugi's secret lol.
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