| "Rivers of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: lemonera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 15:41 CST
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And it's 2007... =/ Hello? Anyone there?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 08:49 CDT
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~starts to cry~ You have abandoned it!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 04:07 CDT
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Not to be snotty or anything but the end of that September as come and gone and now we're fast approaching a new one. Then it'll be a whole year. I really hope you haven't given up on this story because you are one of the best suspence authors I've come across.
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Reviewed By: jeena On: August 21, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy a little romance, and KIKYO:{ bashing i hate her. but sofare thiss is a realy good story. keep the capters long!!!!! sorry for any mispelled words.
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Reviewed By: Saran On: July 09, 2005 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your stories so i didnt ezpect this one to be bad. Its just so sad that sesshomaru only came to rin to fuck her though. So sad and hitens a big jerk but thats kind of what makes the story interesting. Anyway write more stories k? I think you should be a pro at writing. Anyhoo bye!
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Reviewed By: awesome On: February 25, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can just see it now. Kikyo is looking for a surrogate mother and she will end up choosing Kagome. Kagome will end up getting pregnant with her own child with Inuyasha and Kikyo will mistake it for her child because Kagome doesn't want to hurt her. Now that is some serious drama there. i can't wait to see what it is that you do with this story.
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 17:25 CST
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PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ update............I beg you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really good update update update......plz
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Title: too lazy to log in
Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: January 18, 2005 00:23 CST
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I hope you haven't forgotten about this story. That would be a great shame. Please keep up the excellent work. -ArcaneFire
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Reviewed By: crzygrl On: October 01, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!!! I TOTALLY LOOOVE THIS FIC. IT'S SOO ORIGINAL AND SOOO CREATIVE AND SOO FUN TO READ. VERY INTERESTING. I HOPE ALL GOES WELL FOR KIKYOU TOO, I MEAN, INU AND HER WERE HAPPY BEFORE, SO THEY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY AFTER, RIGHT???? BUT U PROMISED TO UPDATE THE LATEST AT THE END OF THIS MONTH, BUT U DIDN'T!!! I'M CRUSHED!! *SOB* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: MoonTearGirl On: September 20, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY! OMG OMG OMG! it is sooooooooo good!! i recommended this story to like all of my friends who like Inuyasha! omg..it's sooo good....i really Want Kikyo to just leave....but she won't go....just like in the show. i hope Inuyasha and Kagome get together in the end and that naraku gets his butt whipped. please...PLEASE update soon!!!!!! for the love of us ....please! oh yeah...please also update TFLTF. it's really good...! ja ne MoonTearGirl
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: CM On: September 15, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great story as well as all of your others. You really need to update TFLUF soon, it has been over a month. I have a feeling that i know what is going to happen. Kikyo thinking about a surrogate mother for hers and Inuyasha's baby, possible K/I lemon in the next chapter. I won't go into it anymore though. Hurry up and update anything soon though, i am being driven crazy.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Pao_F_C On: August 15, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is way too cool, when i first read itin aff.net and you stopped writting it i was realy starting to freak out, now that i found it here i really hope that you will finish it, this is an awesome story, but don't make inuyasha leave or the kikyo child thing cause this will make the story waay too long. well, do as you please and update soon. hope u kep up pao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sadia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:56 CDT
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I really like your storyline. It has a sense of realism, and some great characterization. My one problem with it is that sometimes you make things a bit too wordy, or try to make them sound professional. I think you can just stick with their natural, more casual speech, because it might come out better. All your dialogue between the friends is entertaining, though! I'm glad that you tried to take a new turn with Kikyo, and that Inuyasha is very much in character. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 12:38 CDT
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awww, that's okay...When I saw the notifying email for this I was like "w00t new chapter!" but the A/n was okay! I can't wait till you update! muhahaz. I could wait 4 ever w/ this story and your others, just to know what happens in the end!! Please keep up the great work! A loving fan, Krystal.
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Title: darckinu
Reviewed By: darckinu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 16:32 CDT
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Hey i love your story come on you should update soon i want so bad to know what's next hope you update soon please!!!! i really, really love your story.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:51 CDT
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Plaese update LUV your story!
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 26, 2004 23:37 CDT
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Aaarrgg!! Aacckkkk!!! Uuugghhhh!! What are you doing to me???!! Sess almost killed, Kikyou coming back (and 'in love' again), Inu leaving!!!angst, ANgst, ANGST!!!!!!!!---well, at least it looks like Inu and Kag will have a--dare I say??--VERY gratifying moment?? ^_~ *sigh*....about damn time!! ^_^ update date soon, pray tell.......
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great up-date can't wait to read more so do it again soon^_^
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Reviewed By: (Taka) On: May 26, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...up.... date.... *passes out*
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 14:40 CDT
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I thought Sesshomaru was going to die for sure. God, I feel sorry for everyone in this chapter.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 26, 2004 10:13 CDT
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You just always have make me go dumbstruck don't you? Update soon I think I'm gonna cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Patsita On: May 14, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story...so sad about kags and inu though... keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo2713 On: May 13, 2004 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is great! I just wish InuYasha and Kagome would stop fighting it and get together. Kikyo doesnt deserve InuYasha shes a self-centered lil bitch! (dont mistake my name I like it I just dont like her)
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really really really really really really really really great up-date and can't wait to read more so up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!! What ever you do, you can't let Kikyo and Inuyasha get back together! Some how Naraku must win her over so they can get divorced so Inuyasha and Kagome can go at it like Jackrabbits to rid the sexual tension between the two of them. I hope that our beloved fluffy doesn't die, because well. that would be just sad, in all truth i love fluffy and he just rocks! and as for sango and Miroku, please let him recover, because he just aint a good drunk. lol well i love your story so much and i can't wait till you update. SO please keep up the good work and update as quickly as possible. NOw i'm going to go review on ff.net! muhahahaz Krystal.
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Title: Ranting
Reviewed By: Assassin_Chiq [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! there are so many times i would've cried (if i was capable *sigh*)... The whole Rin and Sesshie thing, *tear*, the whole Inu sayin thing kag noticing, *tear* Sango and Miroku and his alcohol(sp?) addiction *tear* (Nice twist by the way never saw it coming, i was scared, i thought after u said he drank that he beats sango, and i was like please kami no, please kami no, over and over in my mind *sigh*) And then there was one point in the story before u said Kikyo was pregnant but u really hinted on it, i was like OMG SHE WAS PREGNANT!!! and I was like, but she still shouldn't shut everyone out... AND THEN i found out that she is uncapable of having children, and i was like *tear* oh... OMG U STORY HAS SO MUCH FLIPPIN ANGST IF I COULD CRY I WOULD BE DROWNING RIGHT FLIPPIN NOW!!! (lol sorry, my little outburst, but i really do like it this way, couldn't see it any other way)... The whole Kag goin out with Hojo started this whole thing!! grr... sometimes i swear i wanna kill that boy... ANYWAYZ... *laughs nervously* i babble to much, but ya, LUV the story, u have to continue... Luv 'n' Hugs, Assassin Chiq
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Reviewed By: Kikyo2713 On: May 11, 2004 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Italics GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 11, 2004 19:27 CDT
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Inuyasha is a big stupid head!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could he say all those things!?!?!?! But I'm glad Sango finally told Kagome and that Kagome is going to give Miroku a job!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Rin finally told Sesshoumaru the truth!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon because that preview was interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 14:36 CDT
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Excellent story! I enjoyed reading every chapter. This last chapter made me cry, with Rin and Sesshomaru and InuYasha and Kagome. Especially the conversation between InuYasha and Kagome, well I shouldn't call it a conversation since InuYasha did all the talking.
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Title: Keh Sesshomaru Die...yeah right
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't even believe it if it happened...He could be brought back to life verious ways...I will not be fooled. Great couple of chapters, looking forword to more soon.
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