| "I'll be watching you..." Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"His heart screamed with pain at watching his angel in such agony. Her body was shaking from the immensity of her sobs and the coldness of the air. He could feel what her heart was screaming out to him..." "Oh, Kami. His breath quickened when his eyes locked with hers. She saw him?! Better yet he could feel the warmth on her skin where his hand was now touching her arm." This story was so good... I'm not trying to give away the story so i stopped. awe. it was a very short story that started out sad and ended up having a happy ending. i loved it when i learned that InuYasha was alive again, it almost made me cry. Good job!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~~Hey!!! This fic was amazing! It was so sweet and cute...it also made me cry **Sniffle** Well... hope you write mayb a sequel or more chaps to this fic... i would b great.. i know... *sigh* i wish i had writing skills like u do...~~~
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Reviewed By: songa On: September 16, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww. that was soo cute. i love all of your stories, you turly do the kogome/inuyasha relationship justice
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Reviewed By: Juniper On: May 25, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the fic and hope that there is another chapter and for and idea for a song i think you should do a chapter to Truly Madly Deeply by Savage Garden.
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Title: Me Gusta
Reviewed By: oddsbodikins [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 13:54 CDT
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I like this idea! Nice that it's so short! That means that it will be finished soon!
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Title: Me gusta
Reviewed By: oddsbodikins [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 13:53 CDT
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Reviewed By: li karefree one On: March 31, 2004 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never cry. This story touched me it is the first time i cried in 4 years. I loved it. your my absolute favourite author ever. i read it again and again and again........
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Reviewed By: lil_shortazz On: March 16, 2004 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh luv this everything u write seem to b gold...let see i read like forever alone n from friendship to love n the sequel n this so far...all of them amazing...heh...plz try to update all of them soon...much luv...this was so sad in the beginning it was start to make my heart hurt but it good the way this chapter ended heh... so happi now ;) *smiles* *gigglez* oh plz e-mail me at lil_shortazz@hotmail.com n tell when u update something much luv and appriecation luv Yen
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Reviewed By: Strata On: February 21, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooo good! Please update soon! (Along with your other stories and that sequel...)
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 20:46 CST
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(tear) so beautiful
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Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds42069 On: February 05, 2004 11:49 CST
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i really liked your story it almost made me cry thinking of it. I cant wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: January 25, 2004 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cried it was so great please get the next chappie soon
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Title: ohhhhhh
Reviewed By: grinning idoit On: January 23, 2004 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonKitty51 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:05 CST
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oh i almost cried!!!!! great story!!!! Can't wait for you to post the next chappie! ;)
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 23, 2004 08:30 CST
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Good start. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for writing!
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