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| "Proud Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dacheran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, definately worth reading... but... eh. I'm not sure... something just strikes me as off about it. Nice touch putting Marron with both Goten and Trunks though. Kinda a poke at both G&M pairing fans and T&M pairing fans, it seems to me. And it certainly doesn't hurt that Raditz and Marron are two of my favorite characters, though I seem to remember Radditz being a lot more angry and insolent than you've had him so far. I can imagine him gritting his teeth while Vegeta dresses him down. Eh, it's good.
| Title: Haha this is funny
Reviewed By: Rediculously_goodlooking On: February 13, 2004 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I cant believe that you hooked marron up with everyone that I think is the humourous part And woziz who does Bra like...? 0_0 Im liking this fanfic its cracked...lol keep it up and keep it coming
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