Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko (Not signed in) On: March 04, 2004 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you definetely deserve a review for something this good and since no one is sweet enough to give you one, and I've read this fic on three different sites, three times each, I've decided that I'll just have to do it. Yeah... Majority comment? I L-U-V this fic. I've read other ones with Misty losing an ass of a boyfriend and Ash comes up to console her and all but I liked the british-cursing character you put her in. And I thought it was real cute with the whole 'Jumping cartwheels' and things. I think that phone conversation is my favorite scene..! --Chibi
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