| "Bitter Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Phoenix On: March 17, 2004 04:09 CST
Comment/Review:
So if he knew the bog demon could've saved Rin this way, why the hell didn't he make her do that to begin with? Apology, doll and everything. He just wanted to screw around is what I think. Rin should just leave the damn screwy house with her kid in tow.
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Reviewed By: Dark Phoenix On: March 17, 2004 04:06 CST
Comment/Review:
He should've died, she should've died. And social services should've come and take Rin and the kid away.
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Reviewed By: Dark Phoenix On: March 17, 2004 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... I KNEW this was coming for a long time, ever since the "nursemaid" was revealed to be a young demon, and she said she had to perform her "other duties", and Sesshoumaru moving out of her room, etc... but still hearing Sesshoumaru say that REALLY makes *me* ill. I really feel sick. I think I hate this fic.... I was dreading this revelation before, and now that it has come to past... "WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE WITH FLUFFY?!?!?! He's not the type to do something like that!!! No matter the circumstances!!!" is what I wanna say, but hey, it's your story (and thankfully not canon), so you can do what you like... But maaaaann.... am I saaaaaad. :( If social services were around then, I would make sure they had taken Rin and the child away. The fucking cheating bastard.
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Reviewed By: Jedimaster Myoga On: March 08, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good overall, but realism is far off. Do you think at this time that genitics and cells are known to people? It would be better to put the appropriate science in the time period, for the sake of realism.
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Reviewed By: neko_baby_rin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!! One question though...are you going to continue with this story like wat happened after all of this?
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Reviewed By: Bsasami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Started to read your fic and found it interesting. Sesshomaru is so cold most of the time. He needs some good ass-whipping from Rin to shape him up. Can't wait for next update.
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Reviewed By: neko_baby_rin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really exciting plz tell me when u up date.
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Title: Grape Blood
Reviewed By: Grape Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 13:18 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty damn good...
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Reviewed By: GrafZahl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
so far so good, but realy like to kown what happend to them both soon :-)
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