| "Just A Moment" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tangled Briars On: February 22, 2006 02:36 CST
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Dude, lookin good. Are you gunna just leave it there? As a piece of work I like it ending there, but there are some loose threads. But the fangirl part of me wants to see the happy Marron x Carrot ending. Yeah. So maybe you could do a chapter for the fans but have it be seperate? Cause god if it dont work that way Tell me when its ready or whatever, sora_hane@hotmail.com Oh yeah!
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Reviewed By: yvy On: November 06, 2004 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
please more
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: June 01, 2004 14:17 CDT
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end???? noooooo - there must be more - wonderful story and even though i am not a fan of brothers as lovers i can really see this relationship and i think that when the story is written well it dosen't matter - so please can we have more many thanks
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Reviewed By: beanni On: March 07, 2004 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great story, and i hope it gets continued soon! i've actually read many of this author's works, and i can honestly say i enjoyed them all. can't wait for the next section!!!
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Reviewed By: lemonychocolate On: January 27, 2004 21:06 CST
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MORE!
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