| "Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Great
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful lemon and while I know it falls under the context of a technical PWP I find that this fic is insightful in it's own way. If one is familar with the manga and the anime it is common knowledge that there does seem to be something between Gaeteu and Marron but the largest inhibitor to their potential relationship is Marron's older brother. It in it's simple way explores the intricasies of their lives and opinions.
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Reviewed By: Michiru2042 On: March 09, 2004 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No one writes lemons like you do. I gotta say, I'm not against plot either, so I look forward to reading whatever you write in the future. But if you wanted to do some more lemons in the process, you won't hear any complaining!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 19:07 CST
Comment/Review:
PLOT?! NANI? You are threatening me with plot if I don't review? No no no! I'm reviewing I'm reviewing! You can have wonderful lemons and still have plot Miko! Don't stop writing your lemons I love them! We all do! Your writing style has matured I like it, but please keep writing lemons for us! Most of us are hooked!
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