| "AN UNUSUAL LEMON - A boy who loves his work" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Wow, this was another really great chapter. I really love reading this story, and I can't believe how good it is. I was wondering if this was the last chapter or not. I really love it so I hope that you will be able to keep writing.
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, this chapter was really cool. I loved the punishment for Gendo. Keep writing because this story is one of my favorites and I love it. I hope that you're able to udpate soon.
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Title: Wow!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! This is an awesome fanfic. Someone can search the the internet for years and not see anything half this good. Please, I beg of you please continue this. *wipes away a tear*
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Reviewed By: Just a guy On: September 10, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok story. I have to say I haven't seen this kind of plot before. And it was good you included Mana, altrough in strange role. Any hope for Shinji/Mana lemon someday?
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, and I'm glad that you were able to update it. I hope to see the next chapter soon please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:13 CDT
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another great chapter, i look forward to the next. keep up the good work. Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Title: Lord of Night
Reviewed By: Shoushi On: September 06, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! This is an amazing story, and i really hope you're not finished with it yet. Please make the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I hope that you will update it again sometime. This is my fav evangelion story I have ever read. i really hope that you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: Carsomyr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful, taboo breaking, and often hilarious fan fiction. A must read for any fan if for nothing else then the asuka/mana pairing, bravo to you on that one. I hope you intend to write many more chapters on this series, it is in my opinion your best to date (even though your other NGE fic is nearly as good).
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Title: hmr
Reviewed By: hmr On: July 21, 2004 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! As expected , great writing! Your lemon scenes as well as the story is unmatched! keep writing and update soon!
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 12:17 CDT
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if you like this story check out this guys website, hes got chap 8 up. Vader bud, you have got to be the biggest sadist i have ever heard of, i bow before your greatness. keep up the good work, ill see you at the update.
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Title: Hahaha
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: July 17, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, af first I wasn't sure about this fic. But now, I actually like it. And it's not just for the sex scenes either. I would like to see more humorous scenes in this fic like the battle with Zureal, Shinji and Tri sleeping together in the same bed with Misato watching, etc. All in all, it's a good fic and I would like to see more of it. You have an occational dropped letter in a couple of words...or should be for, etc. But over all, this fic is easy to read.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 14:57 CDT
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this guy has alot more of this story on his website, you should check it out. by the way Vader man you have to be the most sadistic gendo basher i have ever had the privelege of knowing. i bow before your greatness. keep it up ill see you at the next update.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: ChAoTiC-LoRd On: July 16, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, WRITE MORE PLEASE. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT TOOK YOU THIS LONG TO WRITE 1 CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Al_Rowen On: July 14, 2004 05:02 CDT
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Just read ch5. I had a great laugh imagining eva2 getting a spanking. Still got tears in the eyes while typing this. The boxing match was fun to. Looking forward to reading your next chapter.
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