| "AN UNUSUAL LEMON - A boy who loves his work" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: Still twitching
Reviewed By: j0 On: July 12, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write...more...please, I beg of you!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing style. Amazing Lemon. Most important,great plot.The 5th chapter was the best so far.I loved the angel part. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Shisou Ikari On: July 12, 2004 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy shit... My only suggestion is to tone down the sleeping around. Make it more with only Lily while the others simply wish to make him happy. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind the sex, as long as it shows love. Now that I have shared that, I will continue to do what a previous reviewer has done by twitching on the floor and begging for more.
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Title: don't stop
Reviewed By: Coldflame On: July 09, 2004 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a pretty good writter. I like your take on this subject. Please continue writting. I would like to read this story to it's complition. So few authors actrully finish thier work.
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Reviewed By: DarkFeenix On: July 07, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll just inform you guys that steve has more chaps online at www.vader-visions.com :) Steve, you should update this fic on here too, not everyone is on the forum or knows about your homepage ;)
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Reviewed By: nmopo On: June 28, 2004 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool chapter.
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Reviewed By: poker On: June 24, 2004 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story and lots of sex, this fic has everything.
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Reviewed By: Chaotic-Lord On: June 24, 2004 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, write some more. This is really good story. Give us a good upgrade next time, OK.
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Title: check Steve's website
Reviewed By: Dany le fou On: June 13, 2004 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to let all the readers of this fic know that Steve already has Chapter 4 uploaded on his website, and that it's even better. Man it's good to see an original idea used so well. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Carsomyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fresh, Original, daring, and above all entertaining! I sincerely hope to see many more chapters of this quality in the near future. Finding quality eva fics has been a challenge lately but your story is a true gem that is note worthy for all eva fans.
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Title: yyyess...
Reviewed By: j0 On: June 11, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lying on floor twitching* moooore.... need.. more....
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Reviewed By: WingBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice you're on my list of favorites
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oho I am liking the subtle byplay indeed, I await more of this fanfiction indeed. Well back to scouting out some good hot steamy R/S fanfics
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Reviewed By: Soda On: June 09, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see Shinji showing a spine, good update.
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Reviewed By: some person On: June 09, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i just finish read the lastest chapters and i am tell u that this is the best fic i've ever read in my reading-fanfic-life!!!GODDAMNIT i can't wait for the next chapter.I'll be back with a new review when u get the next chapter so until then c-ya
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