| "Cold Winter and Warm Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: OHHHH
Reviewed By: InuyashasLoverTigerLily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UDATE!!!THAT WAS GREAT!!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(gawd! i wanna no if this color thing actually works!!! >:0) eh...anyway nice story! pretty good so far! keep it up!...soo did the color thing work?
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good so far... I like it ^-^ keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
please update! that was good!! i love it!
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Title: returning the favor
Reviewed By: youkai_tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 15:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is good. I like how they left Shippo behind with Kaede.The story is flowing well. My own personal rule when writing is detail detail detail. The conversations between characters are good. If you want to talk sometime email me or IM. just check the profile. youkai tsuki
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Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've reviewed my story, so when I saw you had one, I figured I'd return the favor. :) You have a nice turn of phrase, and I like how you made a point to bring up Kagome's feelings at being caught in the middle of two often obnoxious males. This is off to a good start, and I'm looking forward to what you come up with next.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Ice Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, excellent story Belle ^_^ I have just one request...ok, make that two. Longer chapters, and UPDATE SOON ONEGAI! ^_^ Arigato!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great story so far can't wait till u up-date again
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, sweet. It's very good, but I think that you may be putting too much description into stuff that may not be important. Sure, it's nice to read some simple stuff that is routine for the characters, but if you do it too much, then it can get boring. Anyway, please update soon!! ^___^
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Title: Bear
Reviewed By: Ice Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, Belle, however, I must add that when I first came upon this story, I didn't know that it was yours. I read it, loved it, and added it to my favorites before I figured it out. lol, I'll be your best fan, just make sure you write MORE! Ja ne! ^_^
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 13:52 CST
Comment/Review:
hello! i reall ylike the story pleaze update soon.....Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: inuyasha nsi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very orginal way to get them by themselves. i like this story so hook us up with another chappie. lime or lemon or lots fluff doesnt matter to me.
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Reviewed By: ArcaneFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 23:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn, I was hoping to be first to review...Oh well, you're off to a good start, to be sure. I like the way that you handled the Shippo issue. I know that I always have trouble with that. Damn he's hard to write. Any way, the story looks good thus far; I look forward to future installments in this story.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the begining very good with the whole shippo thing...cute inu and shippo fighting all the time...so very true...I also like the way you have Inu behaving and she rubbs his ears without thinking!!!!1 Thats great keep writing please!!!!!!
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