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| "Kagome's New Baby Brother!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: huh????
Reviewed By: yo! banana boy? On: January 21, 2006 10:31 CST
Comment/Review:
not so bad.... i think.
| Reviewed By: mental On: February 04, 2004 01:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, I just read your fanfic and I loved it.It scared the freakin' crap out of me when I read the title.What REALY freaked me out was that the father of her brother was Miroku.I thought that perverted monk just did something to kagome's mother that I do not want to mention, but a sperm bank freaked me out as well(is it weard that a13-year-old girl knowswhat a sperm bank is bu dosent know what puberty is)so kep writing more chapters.Now if you excuse me, my doctor is about to kick my ass for not taking my steroids(inhalers)
| Title: *Story SPOILERS: Please read fic first!*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was cool. *lol* And here I thought that somehow either Miroku and Mrs H got through the well and ... I'm such a hentai. So this means that Kagome is the aunt of Miroku's child? Wild. I mean, it wasn't a clone... so the child is related by blood to Kagome. Poor Sango... it's a shame that they might never MEET the child. Pictures and letters can only do so much ... but if that's all there is, then I guess they'll be content with what they can get. It would suck if during the "final confrontation" with Naraku that the kid starts getting a windtunnel... a sign to Kagome's family that they might lose. *lol* Miroku is always good for a laugh. What'd he say? "The only woman I never asked..." or something like that. *lmao* And the letter. "It would be a shame for your bloodline to not continue..." Uhhh, I know that wasn't your wording, but I forgot to open the review box in another window. You deserve a 20 for creativity! This has to be the most unique Inu-Yasha "pairing" EVER!!! ^_~
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