Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Matt! Your story needs to be be written a little longer and you forget to end your sentence with a question mark, exclamation mark, or a period. Bye, Big Bro!
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