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| "Harbinger of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Awesome again
Reviewed By: Jrod-san [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this second one you were writing and it was great man. Excellent depiction of the massacre at 30-bunch most peole who dont pay attention to Zeta gundam mess up on it. Well i love the characters, all fo them are great. And very interesting hwo you related the diet sessioin to help out the AEUG, i forgot they got funding from many colonies and governments. I love the story so far so keep up the writing man its excellent.
| Title: I just noticed...
Reviewed By: sephlier (again...it says I'm not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I just noticed a passage in your bio...I think it was... Don't wait for people to review your story. Obviously, they're not going to. I hate to say it, like that. I've found that most people would rather read and remain silent than putting forth some effort to relay how they really feel on a certain story. I think it's mainly a selfishness issue that they need to work on. I advise you to "fight on" *fist extended proudly* I found your other story!!! *YAYYYY!! That story, too, has been added to my favorites* It's strange (just to let you know) that when I clicked on the link beside your name, a page turned up and said that your bio and other works were not to be found *I took this as meaning they were nonexistant* You can ask, request, and demand reviews but, nine out of ten times, you will/might not get them. If you have something to write or say just do it ^_^ I, however, am not afraid and I stand by your story/stories, as mentioned in my previous review. I would LOVE to know what happens next!!! If you find that you don't want to upload your new chapters because of the lack of reviews...what are reviews anyway? Who REALLY cares what others think, yes?!...my email address is sephlier@yahoo.com. I would LOVE to read more!! You have an excellent story going!! Keep it up!!! Maybe, your readers will finally show some sort of strength and stand up and place some reviews...some semi-intelligent ones ^_^ Ones that don't consist of "you suck dude" and "update PLEEEEEEEEEEZE/ PUH-LEEZE" ^_^
| Title: I Like This ( I'm not a Gundam fan nor do I pretend to be)
Reviewed By: sephlier(not logged in) On: March 27, 2004 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, your spelling and grammar should be at least a twenty (big words my friend, big words). As mentioned, I am not a Gundam (of any sort) fan. I can suddenly hear chants of: you call yourself a fangirl blasphemy, BLASPHEMY!!. I like the pretty boy faces of Gundam Wing but I never could bring myself to care for the story lines (especially being so politically charged). You have captured my curiousity ^_^ I have heard of Zeta Gundam but only in passing through Mobile Suit: Gundam and Mobile Suit: Gundam Wing sites (love those pretty boys XD) What happened after the bottle of Vodka was shattered? What did her brother do to her? You have so much going on, in that short. I can't help but wonder what the outcome is/will be. Does any of this happen in the anime? Can you recommend Zeta Gundam? I haven't looked to see if you wrote any other stories...I hope you have!! I've added you to my favorites list anyways ^_^ Thank you for sparking my interest, even if you may not be writing anymore!!!
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