| "Interruptus" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: CT-yeah, you can probably guess who this is On: April 13, 2004 13:17 CDT
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I realize I have been a very bad reader and I haven't reviewed this story yet. Go figure. You can yell at me as much as you want to later on. Onto the review... Wow, that was hot! Threesomes are always fun. I think I'm going crazy and I'm going to start nosebleeding any minute. Nicely written, E. Keep it up. ~CT
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Reviewed By: Nalan On: February 10, 2004 08:41 CST
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Hee! It was v. cute. Little too much explanation in the beginning, though. Sounded a bit contrived. I adored Omi. ^.^ Cute little bugger. Also Yohji's rationalization; v. amusing. I liked, I did. And, um, sorry for lack of commenting earlier. >.>
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Reviewed By: fanny On: February 02, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was good! -dies of foreshadowing- I can't wait to read the sequel!
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Reviewed By: Starshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 03:50 CST
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**swoon** Phwoar! This was a joy to read. My heart goes out to Omi, poor sweet, having to endure all the unresolved sexual tension and bantering. I cannot wait to see Aya get relief of a direct and most excellent sort in the near future. Good work! ^__^
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Reviewed By: siberian On: February 01, 2004 06:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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man, that was HOT ^^;;!!!!! now could you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more of this? explicit lemons will be good ;)... oh and in the threesome (there WILL be threesome, right? ), kenken will be the ultimate uke right? because i just can't picture ken being seme to any of yohji or aya^^;;.. moorreeeee!!
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Reviewed By: toniq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 01:10 CST
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wow this is umm.. how do you say it, HOT! hehe the butt plug was interesting Can't wait to see what happens next
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