| "Happiness is not an option." Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: >_
Reviewed By: mistaken feather [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!! YOUR FIC IS GOOC!!! BUT IT WAS WEIRD TO READ ALL THOSE LANGUAGES IN ONE. STICK TO EATHIER ENGLISH AND ANOTHER LANGUAGE(IN FAN FICTIONS)
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 05:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I would like to say that your summary tells me nothing. At best, it reminds me of some philosophical essay. A summary like that is just as bad as "Please I suck at summaries so I won't even try." Why don't you tell us the plot in your summary? Don't spell out what is going to happen, just give us a vague idea about what we are going to read. Otherwise, people won't even bother to read it. I'm not going to pick up a book off the library shelf unless It has a summary I can read (classics don't count, because everyone knows their summaries), so I won't read a fanfic that doesn't have a summary either.
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Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw dooooooooood.................................. Man do I feel sorry for ya.Gomen Nasi if this is a compleatly stupid review.Anyays keep up the good work! JA NE! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Angel Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic, I really like poems/fanfics like this. Angelina
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was good, a little short though, but other then that it was pretty good. Update, because I want to freakin know who is telling the story, and who this "girl" is.
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Title: one more thing
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
koinekid id wrong dude they will read cause they want to no what's it about! DUH DUDE koinekid get your brain in order!! Dude don't be mad at me 4 writen that but dude that wrong they'll read it.
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Title: dude!
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Yo u have to write more then that! Dude don't do that u made me mad! That was good but ( longer dude longer chapter) ! Well dude please write more
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yo I can help you if you want...I can b ur beta reader and I can do a summary for you but only if I know what the general idea is....and I will only do this if you really want me too....But it is still a good start.
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Reviewed By: koinekid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 23:50 CST
Comment/Review:
"Please I suck at summaries so I won't even try." --In that case, many will not bother reading.
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Reviewed By: Little Rin On: January 29, 2004 01:24 CST
Comment/Review:
"Calm y Collected-sama"? Um.... You might want to get a whole sentence out before you use three languages...
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