| "Finality" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Baby Boo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 15:01 CST
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AHHHHHH!! So scary but I found it rather funny too. Don't ask, I'm insane!! So I hope you write more fics like these. You write very good angsty fics!! Sorry if I scare you.
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Reviewed By: Kacey On: October 30, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crying* Your so evil how could you??? They can't die bring them back or have Yami or someone bring them back PPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZ?!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!? I love them so mouch you can't kill them!!!!!! *cries ten times harder*
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sweatdrop* Okay I think my computer is screwed up....
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Title: To Lil Mana and LilAznBaby 483
Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I never said I didn't like them. I love Ryou and Bakura. Writing a deathfic about them is not 'cruel'. A ton of other people do it. If you can't handle deathfics, don't read them. I apologize for not putting a warning in the summary, but you don't have to flame me just because you misinterpreted what I wrote. Screw you both.
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Title: To Lil Mana and LilAznBaby 483
Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 14:55 CDT
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I never said I didn't like them. I love Ryou and Bakura. Writing a deathfic about them is not 'cruel'. A ton of other people do it. If you can't handle deathfics, don't read them. I apologize for not putting a warning in the summary, but you don't have to flame me just because you misinterpreted what I wrote. Screw you both.
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Title: cruel!
Reviewed By: LilAznBaby 483 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lil mana's sissy here........YOU ARE A JERK! ALL OF YOU! WHY DO U WANT BAKURA 2 DIE!!!??? RYOU-KUN IS AWESOME AND SO IS BAKURA-KUN! U ARE SCREWED! DOENST MATTER IF BAKURA WAS A TOMB RAIDER! HE JUST WANTED TO TOUGHEN UP LIL RYOU-KUN!! THATS ALL!
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Reviewed By: LiL Mana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL JERK!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU KILLED 2 BISHIEZ!!!! YOU CRUEL JERK! IT WASNT SCARY!!! JUST PLAIN CRUEL!!!!
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Reviewed By: Samantha J. C On: June 18, 2004 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...My...GODS!!!!!!! Your story was so well written! I'm in tears! Oh poor Ryou! Poor Bakura! Those two are my favorites....you discribed the whole thing so well it was like I was actually in the kichen with Ryou and Bakura! You are an amazing writter AMK!
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Reviewed By: KaoriLindsayBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:57 CST
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poor Ryou *forgets Bakura* poor ryou i miss him so much *sees ryou behind her* Oh hey Ryou like I said I missed you Ryou
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 04, 2004 20:20 CST
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BAKURA DESERVED TO DIE THAT B**** HE TORMENTED MY RYOU TO DEATH *starts sobbing uncontrollably*
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Reviewed By: Caos On: February 01, 2004 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit this was by far worth reading. I can see how you'd scared the hell out of your self. DDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNN, this was definitly good.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 17:53 CST
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*wipes away tears* Slightly morbid, and obviously angsty and dark, but it's still one of the best Ryou/Bakura-suicide fics I've ever read. ja ne!! Oh, u might also want to rate it PG-13 instead of PG. Cuz of the blood and such...
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic, although quite sad. ~_~ *doesn´t like Ryou dying* Ah well...I better go read a fluffy piece after this. ^_^
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Title: (Sniff, sniff).
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sad. . . (Sniff, sniff). They both died. NO!!! MY PRECIOUS BAKURA AND RYOU!!! Poor, poor, poor Ryou. . . Maybe Bakura. But, that was the most touching fic I've ever read. Literally! That was. . . .(Sniff, sniff). Briliant!!!! I loved it. It's over right? Or are you going to have a funeral or something with all of Ryou's friends? Hope you have another chapter. Please?! I love your fics. . . . . . . .
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Title: (Sniff, sniff).
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ryou.(Sniff, sniff). Poor, poor, poor, poor Ryou. . . Okay, I need to stop. It's really good, though sad. You did a great job explaining everything. I just love your fics! I can't wait to see how Bakura will deal with it. Upload the next chappie soon. . . . Poor Ryou. . . . .
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