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| "The Reincarnation of Heero and Duo" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Akennea On: January 30, 2004 06:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Half-Tongue On: January 29, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals like a little girl* SO KAWAII!!! *claps hands and bounces* Sorry. There are very few things that make me go AWWW! And well, I just did for your fic! Uhm...just a little hint, if you don't mind me pestering! It would be a good idea to pay a little more attention to detail and emotions. It probably would have been a good idea to make the flashbacks painful and vivid and detailed for them. After all, the war wasn't the happiest thing in the world! Meh. It's just a suggestion, detail of things, people, and emotions adds richness AND length so give it a shot if you want! Thankyou for listening, I will be looking for updates! ^_~
| Reviewed By: Half-Tongue On: January 29, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals like a little girl* SO KAWAII!!! *claps hands and bounces* Sorry. There are very few things that make me go AWWW! And well, I just did for your fic! Uhm...just a little hint, if you don't mind me pestering! It would be a good idea to pay a little more attention to detail and emotions. It probably would have been a good idea to make the flashbacks painful and vivid and detailed for them. After all, the war wasn't the happiest thing in the world! Meh. It's just a suggestion, detail of things, people, and emotions adds richness AND length so give it a shot if you want! Thankyou for listening, I will be looking for updates! ^_~
| Reviewed By: Devina On: January 29, 2004 10:12 CST
Comment/Review:
0_0...wow...u know this kinda reminds me off that whirlwind in the game black and white ya know when the other god destroy's ya realm...thank goodies i was a bad ass XD anyhow i liked it pls continiu..ill be watching u! *throws more people in that whirlwind *crazy laugh* MWUHAHAHAHAHAHA..*cough* he...>
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