| "Separation Anxiety" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Would you like a plot with that?
Reviewed By: rintaun On: February 18, 2004 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I picked this fic out of a list of all of those on the site. And I must say... I'm quite please on my choice. From the description of the story, I figured it would be just another lemon. A "Fake almost-plot. Sex. End." deal. However... I am proud to say that I was horribly wrong. It had a plot! I loved that. You were also very descriptive and quite realistic, in my opinion. The only problem I noticed were a few spelling errors, hence the 9 in that category. But your grammar was dead on. You have some real talent, and I hope you keep writing for a long time.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Rumiko Sakurai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in a moment to type my review, i made a mistake and put a "9 out of 10" for the overall rating. when that was suppose to be a "10 out of 10" sorry. anyways, it was still the best
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Title: too good
Reviewed By: Rumiko Sakurai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was too good! oh my gosh. i don't know what to say. it..it was the best!
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