Title: Bad.
Reviewed By: KittyBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really bad story. Your writing is slopply, and you have bad spelling. I have to admit, it was an original idea, but awful follow-through. You really _need_ to flesh out the story more. Take all that you have written, and combine them into one, and see what you get. Capitalize your words, where needed. And Try, Try again!
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