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| "Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 21:41 CDT
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Hahaha, months after the awesome update, and this story still holds as being awesome as hell. First, second, third and fourth, I ask for the story to be updated soon. It would rock. Second, I have to say, I wonder if Nabiki will come into the picture sometime (did she run away with a girl, or a foreigner? if it was a girl, my bets lay with Kodachi) as well as, how will Jenny handle all this craziness? Personally, I think she'd want to meet her fellow love interests (and I think that it would be fun if Sabouro did end up loving all of them. Afterall, Ranma is an awesome character in the manga (and probably could handle the physical part of a relationship with 4 or more women, though maybe not the emotional part as well) though as usual, your portrayal of Ranma as a woman is exceedingly well done. Really, thumbs up for that, you rock with that. Anyway, thanks for updating, and I need to start on my own stories sometime *sigh*. Anyway, please update again soon, like I mentioned, and the air battles are intense to read. Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reviewing. later
| Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good fic. Some of my favorite fics are the ones where Ranma turns out liking his girl sid, and this particular story forces him to. Overall, very well written. Please update again! I MUST HERE END OF STORY! If you do, I'll give you a cookie.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 23:24 CDT
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Wow, I guess I reminded you this account exited then, huh? Thanks for adding more of the chapters of this story, this one rocks. Not to mention everything with gong back to Nerima (and willing to share Naburo is VERY interesting *giggles* oh crap I just giggled *smack self in face, moves on to pummeling self a-la-fight club*)Anyway, I love that you updated, thank you for noting my earlier post. Well, I want to read more of this story, so update here on MM.org when the next chapter or chapters come out, ok? Later
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, seems tis story never did get any reviews. I make a correction on that. This story is UNIQUE. I cannot stress that enough, as this is the sole realistic Ranma fanfiction that i've seen. Not to mention, it is damn well written. Still, I have no overall knowledge, or even understanding of the aircraft in this story, I am impressed by the level of detail, and writing quality of this story. And if you never recieve this message becuase you closed don this account due to a lack of reviews, I understand. Still, I'm writing this as thanks for a good tale, about a Ranma that actually does accept becoming a girl, no, a woman 100% of the time. On the upside, this story is fun, but also skillfully dramatic. On top of that, hope Chris is okay in the end. Neh, besides, I think it's almost too much to hope for an update at this late date, over 2 years since last update, but this tale is quite good. I look foward to seeing more of your work
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