| "Hello Brother!" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Hello Brother!
Reviewed By: Empress_Koki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!! You have to update soon!! what do you mean by Dragons? Kaoru and her brother are dragons then? Thats so awesome!! The only thing I must say on spelling is that your spelling Kaoru's name wrong but the rest is very good!! ^-^ Please update your story and make it a little longer if you may. And explain about Kaoru's past, is she stronger or something like that?? I love how you made Keitaru (forgive me by any chance if I spelled his name wrong) his personality and protective demeanor for his sister. How old is he? And it was hilarious when he just appeared and paraphrasing if I may? "Kaoru you got two lovers and a child!" I seriously burst out laughing , I had to cover my mouth or I would have woken my parents. I'm reviewing at night. Lol Please update LOVE your story.
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Title: Hello Brother!
Reviewed By: star stalker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Now if only you could make the chapters longer and update faster? Please? Update update update really fast, thanks! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bscl432 On: October 11, 2004 00:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't worry so much any update is better than nothing and a good cure for writers block is to write about something stupid you would never show to some one like the time you went to the zoo and saw a blue lion or something any way keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: k-love On: October 10, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you do update soon! I'll be checking! (I'm excited! yay! lol) ~Katrinalove
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Title: katz
Reviewed By: Katrinalove14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Since i already rated this story I see no need to do so again...When are you going to update? It's a good story...but if you are not going to update can you at least put up a notice that says you won't be continuing? I wish you would tho...It breaks my heart to think you might not... ~Katrinalove
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Reviewed By: onnie On: July 06, 2004 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story and it is one of the few RK fanfics on mm.org that i have felt was good enough to review. I look foward to finding out what happens next. Good luck with the rest of ur story b/c i look foward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really great. especially the brother. he sounds kind of like sano though. well, please add another chappy!
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: June 09, 2004 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! It's a great fic, and I think it's great how Kaoru finally told Megumi off. It's about time! I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: June 02, 2004 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
o my gosh that was soooo good plz update really soon
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Reviewed By: Yarisha_Mikamora On: May 24, 2004 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely. WHEEEE KAORU TOLD MEGUMI OFF I LOVE THIS! Write more. OR ELSE. UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah, very good fic!
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Reviewed By: DarkAnimeChick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
hmph! serves her right! alwayz "bullying" Kaoru like dat! *shakez head* *sigh* well... update soon i want 2 noe wut happenz nex okai?!?! plz!??!
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Title: gabyhyatt
Reviewed By: gabyhyatt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
great fic
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