| "Out in the Fog" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: anime gher [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 21:15 CDT
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that's it? ... that files for cruel and unusual. this was a great find in the middle of nowhere, really good and over before i even knew it. no fair, please write some more. something more. i need closure.
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Reviewed By: deunank On: March 21, 2004 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Yeah, I wish there was more too. But really well written. Heh, and set in SF! My favorite city. I liked all the details about Yohji cooking. Kinda seems anti-climatic (climactic? spelling is gone) for Yohji the professional assassin to get caught by a silent alarm. I want him to be better than that. But something had to happen. Sleep deprivation will make one make mistakes :D
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Reviewed By: Me_agin On: February 14, 2004 20:31 CST
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...whoa impressive I...LOVE IT what no epilogue no sexy steamy after flight chapter oh well maybe u canwrite a sequel
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Reviewed By: anime gher [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 23:53 CST
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aya as a cop. ha-cha-cha-cha-cha. sexy! must say i find this cute, when's the 'other side of the law' gonna come in? aw, hell, i don't care, gotta read more!
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Reviewed By: Nymphaea On: February 05, 2004 23:53 CST
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Aw, that's so sweet~ Such a nice story, and I wish there was more too.. but it's a nice ending, it suits the feeling of the entire fic. I really like your writing style, what with the smooth flow of the story. Good job! Write more YohjixAya/Ran soon, you have such a way with them!
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Reviewed By: Aurura On: February 01, 2004 15:01 CST
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Wonderful story. Wish there was more.
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