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Reviewed By: calmwind On: March 14, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovely, lovely, freshly written. please write more!!!
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Title: Chapter five
Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: March 13, 2004 04:20 CST
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I enjoyed this chapter very much. It was something new to see a slave as a bodyguard and I must admit that this makes this fic even more interesting. I can't waite for the next chaptre though I've just finished this one.
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Reviewed By: Catherine. P.T On: March 13, 2004 03:38 CST
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I was following it for a while but know you've got me seriously interested.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 23:41 CST
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Heero's got it bad alright. Trowa's got it bad too. I can't wait 'till you write more. I want to see what happens.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: March 12, 2004 12:29 CST
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I want to thank you for answering my questions. now every thing makes perfect sense to me. Do I need to mention that Chapter FIVE was Just great?????
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe! On: March 12, 2004 03:32 CST
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Duo is a kick ass fighter! Hehe! I love that he's all strong and shit, it makes him sooooo hot... yeah, its 3:30 in the morning, my review kinda sucks, and for that i apologize, but anyway, great chapter, thanks for the update, and i'd love to see more soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 08:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story, please write more! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: March 06, 2004 16:28 CST
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It's always a delight to see a new chapter up.
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Reviewed By: Marjan On: March 04, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like it. I hadn't had such a good laugh for a long time.
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Reviewed By: Amanda. J On: March 02, 2004 18:06 CST
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Finding your fanfiction was one of the best thing that lately happened to me.Actually I wasn't a GW/AC fan and had only read the Manga but thank to your work I not only started to like GW but also searched the web for more fics (and BIG SURPRISE!!!) found some really well written GW fictions. Thank you very much for the good time I had reading GW fictions. I hope to see more Chapters of The taming soon. Reading it was so unbelievingly delightful. I love to know what comes next. Heero is very lucky to have such an willing slave. his fears that may be Duo makes fun of him are also somehow cute.I wonder if Duo'll Success in seducing Heero????? OH by the way, the 3x4 thing is also CUTE and refreshing.
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Reviewed By: Chandeni On: February 29, 2004 12:57 CST
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chapter 4 was great. I can't waite to see what else games Duo will play on Heero. Poor Hee-chan traped between Duo and Relena... well that is fun, minus the Relena part of course!!! I can't waite to see when and How Duo will seriously be attracted to Heero.
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: February 29, 2004 11:58 CST
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I enjoyed this chapter as much as the other ones though two things are a little vague for me: 1- How comes that Duo becomes all of a sudden mindfull when it comes to eating? you mentioned that Quatre was eating fruits and Duo had heero's permission to eat , then why .... or is he testing his master? 2- if the men who'd bothered Quater fetched Trowa, then they knew to whom Quatre belonged, so how came that they aggressed him without worrying about Trowa's reaction? ... and then going and fetch him? doesn't it look suspicious? Hope you don't take it as critic or some thing, it just made me think a little, so I thought I might as well share my thoughts with you.
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe ^_^ On: February 29, 2004 02:37 CST
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I've throughly enjoyed your first four chapters. Duo and Quatre fit their roles seemlessly, and while I'm not sure how in-character Heero and Trowa are proving themselves to be at this point, I think the fic is coming along smashingly. How about a lil' snogging between Trowa and Quatre while their starkers in the tub, eh? Poor bloke, Trowa, torn between the sexy piece of ass in his lap and his concience, but alas we wouldn't have him any other way. ^_^ I can't wait for further development between Duo and Heero! *sigh* Yes, they're my favorite pairing, I know I'm biased, but I'm alright with that! ^_~ Please update again soon! Love your work!
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Reviewed By: SAFKE On: February 28, 2004 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it and I always look for updates.please don't abandon it.
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Reviewed By: Malake Afagh On: February 15, 2004 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can somebody read "the taming" and not be fascinated ? I had a very good time reading it. it's exciting and funny at the same time. I like how Duo teases Hee-chan! I can see that Heero is falling for his slave but I'm really very very very curious to know how will Duo fall for heero if he ever falls for him that is. after all he is a well trained slave that has one fault, he talks too much. so I guess he would also tease his other owners ne? Oh that's going to be very interesting . I'm so eager to know when and who and if Duo will attracted towards Heero. Relena's reaction to the whole thing makes me also curious. Would she suggest that Heero give Duo as a gift to someone els or gets rid ofhime any way? or dose she simply ignor him? or even better may be she regards him as danger to her marrige after all? Hmm... I also had a question about Quatre, he is also supposed to be well trained but quite so isn't his reaction a little strange for a well trained and well behaving silent slave? many a master would be mad at him don't you think???
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