| "The Taming" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sahra On: February 14, 2004 04:52 CST
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the story becomes better with each chapter. It's always a great pleasure to find a new chapter of it. I take the liberty to share my oponion about in this fiction: I think you should take the middel way. she is so annoying partly because she was rised that way and partly because she is selfish and arrogant and pleased with herself and yet she has a soft core. deep with in she has also some good qualities hidden but they have seldom a chance to reach her. but how you show her one is for sure she'll drive poor Heero crazy.
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Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: February 13, 2004 14:03 CST
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this chapter was even more fun then the previous ones. I can't waite for the next one. did you mean by "taming" that Duo will be taming his master? sounds like fun. Well from my point of veiw Relena, Despite the fact that has an almost intolerable character, isn't evil inside. She is rather over spoiled, self centered and stupied and I think she can't even imagine that somebody who knowes her in person could show any interest in somebody els. in her little world she sees herseld as the queen of the hearts who can never be threated by an unworthy slave. but may be she pests heero with lectures about slavery, human rights or on the other hand how to treat a slave.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 03:16 CST
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Wonderfull new chapter. Duo is so playfull, lol. Poor "He-chan". Aawwwwhh, hugs Quatre and cuddles him. And Trowa should follow his instincts and talk to Quatre. About Relena, hmm, please, no Duo-torture. There are already so many Relena-makes-Duo's-live-a-living-hell-stories around, it is getting boring. He is a slave, I guess she would simply ignore him and that would anoy Duo a lot. Or you make her act really nice to Duo because Duo makes her laugh and then Heero gets jealous.
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Reviewed By: Devona On: February 11, 2004 02:25 CST
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Yay! You updated! I love you! Great story! I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: February 07, 2004 11:32 CST
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Yeah!this fic is really entertaining . I had so much fun reading it. Duo is rather a strange and very naughty slve and that makes it even more interesting. Hope to see more chapters soon.
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Title: Devona
Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe! cool story! write more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 05:47 CST
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Lol, Heero with a nosebleed. And Duo is really demanding, isn't he? Nearly looks as if he enjoys being a bedsalve? But I'm afraid Relena isn't going to be too happy about her husbands new bed-mate. Trowa is cute, he will take good care of Quatre.
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Reviewed By: Sara chan On: February 05, 2004 04:56 CST
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I like this one. hope you keep updating.
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Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 01:12 CST
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lol, Duo talking Dirty and Heero spurting a nose bleed oooooowwwhhh wonderfull! *grin* anyway i like to say that i liked it tho kinda short *snif* but if u update soon ill forgive! do we have a deal? ne? ne? ne? alrighty well see u in the next chap then ne? ^_~
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Reviewed By: Dona On: February 03, 2004 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhh! I'm sure it's gona be a wonderful fic. hope you up date soon.
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Title: So you're continueing it!
Reviewed By: Sheer Zan On: February 02, 2004 08:46 CST
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It has been quite a time since I've read the 5th chapter of this fic at ff.net since then I've checked your fiction journal many a time but found only 3 chapter there to my disappointment. And now I see the first chapter here again and as it looks that you've uploaded it recently I take it, that your going to continue it .(I hope so at least). I'm just surprised why you've only up loaded 1 chapter? are you going to re-edit the rest? I hope you up date soon and by up date I mean I want to see what happens after chapter 5.(you've abandoned poor Quatre for a long time in the bath! I don't want to know how he looks now after soaking so long in the water!!!!)
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Reviewed By: Chandeni On: February 01, 2004 10:36 CST
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Yeah I love Slave fics and seems to be a damn good one. please continue writing and up date SOON.(begges on her knees)
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Reviewed By: Sahra On: February 01, 2004 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a great start. hope you update soon. I'll bet it's going to be a great story. Well it'll be sure fun to see what poor Heero does with his chatty slave and how fast Trowa is going with his slave. Yeh, you've awoken my interestand I hope that you wont abandon this fic.
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Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 13:31 CST
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ill say that Enna Namo is right XD who will tame whom ne? anyhow i liked the chap and ill hope u update soon and for startings: poor Heero and second Poor Q-man...what happend to him? are we ever gonna know? see it in the next episode...no just kidding anyway i liked it! (did i already mentiont that??) and update soon! (that 2?)
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 09:54 CST
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I wonder who is going to tame whom.... lol
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