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Reviewed By: Amanda. J On: March 02, 2004 18:06 CST
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Finding your fanfiction was one of the best thing that lately happened to me.Actually I wasn't a GW/AC fan and had only read the Manga but thank to your work I not only started to like GW but also searched the web for more fics (and BIG SURPRISE!!!) found some really well written GW fictions. Thank you very much for the good time I had reading GW fictions. I hope to see more Chapters of The taming soon. Reading it was so unbelievingly delightful. I love to know what comes next. Heero is very lucky to have such an willing slave. his fears that may be Duo makes fun of him are also somehow cute.I wonder if Duo'll Success in seducing Heero????? OH by the way, the 3x4 thing is also CUTE and refreshing.
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Reviewed By: Chandeni On: February 29, 2004 12:57 CST
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chapter 4 was great. I can't waite to see what else games Duo will play on Heero. Poor Hee-chan traped between Duo and Relena... well that is fun, minus the Relena part of course!!! I can't waite to see when and How Duo will seriously be attracted to Heero.
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: February 29, 2004 11:58 CST
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I enjoyed this chapter as much as the other ones though two things are a little vague for me: 1- How comes that Duo becomes all of a sudden mindfull when it comes to eating? you mentioned that Quatre was eating fruits and Duo had heero's permission to eat , then why .... or is he testing his master? 2- if the men who'd bothered Quater fetched Trowa, then they knew to whom Quatre belonged, so how came that they aggressed him without worrying about Trowa's reaction? ... and then going and fetch him? doesn't it look suspicious? Hope you don't take it as critic or some thing, it just made me think a little, so I thought I might as well share my thoughts with you.
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe ^_^ On: February 29, 2004 02:37 CST
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I've throughly enjoyed your first four chapters. Duo and Quatre fit their roles seemlessly, and while I'm not sure how in-character Heero and Trowa are proving themselves to be at this point, I think the fic is coming along smashingly. How about a lil' snogging between Trowa and Quatre while their starkers in the tub, eh? Poor bloke, Trowa, torn between the sexy piece of ass in his lap and his concience, but alas we wouldn't have him any other way. ^_^ I can't wait for further development between Duo and Heero! *sigh* Yes, they're my favorite pairing, I know I'm biased, but I'm alright with that! ^_~ Please update again soon! Love your work!
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Reviewed By: SAFKE On: February 28, 2004 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it and I always look for updates.please don't abandon it.
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Reviewed By: Malake Afagh On: February 15, 2004 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can somebody read "the taming" and not be fascinated ? I had a very good time reading it. it's exciting and funny at the same time. I like how Duo teases Hee-chan! I can see that Heero is falling for his slave but I'm really very very very curious to know how will Duo fall for heero if he ever falls for him that is. after all he is a well trained slave that has one fault, he talks too much. so I guess he would also tease his other owners ne? Oh that's going to be very interesting . I'm so eager to know when and who and if Duo will attracted towards Heero. Relena's reaction to the whole thing makes me also curious. Would she suggest that Heero give Duo as a gift to someone els or gets rid ofhime any way? or dose she simply ignor him? or even better may be she regards him as danger to her marrige after all? Hmm... I also had a question about Quatre, he is also supposed to be well trained but quite so isn't his reaction a little strange for a well trained and well behaving silent slave? many a master would be mad at him don't you think???
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Reviewed By: Sahra On: February 14, 2004 04:52 CST
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the story becomes better with each chapter. It's always a great pleasure to find a new chapter of it. I take the liberty to share my oponion about in this fiction: I think you should take the middel way. she is so annoying partly because she was rised that way and partly because she is selfish and arrogant and pleased with herself and yet she has a soft core. deep with in she has also some good qualities hidden but they have seldom a chance to reach her. but how you show her one is for sure she'll drive poor Heero crazy.
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Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: February 13, 2004 14:03 CST
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this chapter was even more fun then the previous ones. I can't waite for the next one. did you mean by "taming" that Duo will be taming his master? sounds like fun. Well from my point of veiw Relena, Despite the fact that has an almost intolerable character, isn't evil inside. She is rather over spoiled, self centered and stupied and I think she can't even imagine that somebody who knowes her in person could show any interest in somebody els. in her little world she sees herseld as the queen of the hearts who can never be threated by an unworthy slave. but may be she pests heero with lectures about slavery, human rights or on the other hand how to treat a slave.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 03:16 CST
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Wonderfull new chapter. Duo is so playfull, lol. Poor "He-chan". Aawwwwhh, hugs Quatre and cuddles him. And Trowa should follow his instincts and talk to Quatre. About Relena, hmm, please, no Duo-torture. There are already so many Relena-makes-Duo's-live-a-living-hell-stories around, it is getting boring. He is a slave, I guess she would simply ignore him and that would anoy Duo a lot. Or you make her act really nice to Duo because Duo makes her laugh and then Heero gets jealous.
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Reviewed By: Devona On: February 11, 2004 02:25 CST
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Yay! You updated! I love you! Great story! I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: February 07, 2004 11:32 CST
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Yeah!this fic is really entertaining . I had so much fun reading it. Duo is rather a strange and very naughty slve and that makes it even more interesting. Hope to see more chapters soon.
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Title: Devona
Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe! cool story! write more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 05:47 CST
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Lol, Heero with a nosebleed. And Duo is really demanding, isn't he? Nearly looks as if he enjoys being a bedsalve? But I'm afraid Relena isn't going to be too happy about her husbands new bed-mate. Trowa is cute, he will take good care of Quatre.
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Reviewed By: Sara chan On: February 05, 2004 04:56 CST
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I like this one. hope you keep updating.
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Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 01:12 CST
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lol, Duo talking Dirty and Heero spurting a nose bleed oooooowwwhhh wonderfull! *grin* anyway i like to say that i liked it tho kinda short *snif* but if u update soon ill forgive! do we have a deal? ne? ne? ne? alrighty well see u in the next chap then ne? ^_~
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