Title: *Faints*
Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh,.god...I love it! I absolutely love it! It was great how you managed to put no verbal communication. I wish to write like you. You stole my soul with this fic.It was very passionate and i feel like i'm actually looking right through their eyes when it's Yami's or Seto's perspective.*Sighs in bliss* The choice of words you use to describe what they are feeling,their emotins,makes me want to cry...It was very long,and i enjoyed it much.I love how you placed Seto's doubts but longing into descriptive sentences.You should enter this fic. into a Seto/Yami contest.I bet it will win.^_^ I wish you luck with other fics.,and you have my support.This fic. has a lot of anguish and it saddened my happy mood.But i like the feeling of being desolated,alone,and depressed.It gives me a calm atmosphere to think and draw.It also helps me to write better anguish fics.,as i can now describe what the characters are actually feeling.Anyways,i have to help my sibling brother with his science fair project.Ja ne! Harika Huynh
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