| "My Heart In Your Hands" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: RavenLovesSetoKaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! i was not expecting Marik, very suprising, i was expecting Seto lol* love the story i give it a 10/10 no a 20/10 its just that good. oh and btw, excellent detail. keep it up ^.^ ~raven
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 17, 2005 18:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Continue! I've never seen this pairing and it's so cute! I want to see what happens in this. My only qualm is that Joey trusted Malik way too fast and way too easily. I doubt even a married couple could get over that kind of thing so fast and trust again. After all rape kind of shatters you life and really brings you into depression. If you ever write something like that give them time to over come it after the suicide attempt. Over all a great story and I just can't wait even though it's been monthes and you put them all up at the same time. Update PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE!(Like the bishie on Yu-Gi-Oh are pretty!) Thank You. DK;)
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 18:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story.please update this story I want to know what happenes next.I am getting really antsy about what will happen to joey.
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Title: Very Good Job
Reviewed By: Yaioboy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You detailed it very well and you even threw in some fluffiness.Great Job! ;)
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Reviewed By: purlighten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's a good story! Keep up the great work
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