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| "Conscience" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Baka Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!!! I wanna know what happens!
| Title: It's me again
Reviewed By: It's B-chan Again (>")> On: February 06, 2004 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, about a weak ago, I asked you to even consider making an end, and today when I checked, it said "completed" so my hopes were up. Then I checked how many chapters there was, and there was still only five.... so I am going to ask you again, can you please give it a sixth chapter, please? And if you dont, atleast say that it's up to us to dicide his fate...
| Title: Please?
Reviewed By: Lina (>^^)> On: February 02, 2004 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you write the next one for me? I want to find out what happened to Hiei and how everyone reacts to his actions. But please, don't let the next one be the last, ok? I realy like your story and would like to continue reading them, ok? Please write it soon if possable, ok? Because I only get 1hr every day at TEP in school. And we can do what we want so I read this one alot, I think this is the 7th time reading it, accualy. So it'd be nice to finish it, ya'know?
| Title: Oh no! Hiei!
Reviewed By: Hakuyume (>*.*)> On: January 31, 2004 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIEI! What's gonna happen next!? Please! You got to let me know! I'm absesed with your fan-fic, after all, it's the greatest! I luved everything (ok, maby not the thing about Kuwabara so close to Hiei's beautyful face...)! Please write more, I will hate you if you don't! So just write it, ok!?
| Title: I loved it!!!!!
Reviewed By: B-chan (>")> On: January 31, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My GODS!!! Please! Please write the next part asap!!!! I absolutly loved the whole story so far! It's so sad, and it shows how much everyone cares about Hiei (he has a conscience?)!! If only he knew!! Please! Please write more! Your style is astonishing! The spelling and grammar is flaw-less! It's origionality is superb! I can't stop reading it! Your plot and story seems like it was one of the episodes! I can even visualize it! I'ts flaw-less! Completely flaw-less! I'm not saying this to make you feel good, I truly loved your fanfic! It's now my favorite! Please write the 6th chapter! Please think about it, ok? Please? Luv, Ur biggest fan,
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