| "Freedom of Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Please Update-good story
Reviewed By: ChrisKaz958 On: May 21, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story, it has a lot of potential. YOu could work on your battle scenes a bit more. Maybe draw them out longer and have some more action in there. Just a thought. It would greatly improve the stroy a bit more if you had more fight scenes and went into more detail. Beside that, it is a really good story! I hope you keep writing, i would love to read the rest of it. And i like how you introduced Kagome's dad into the picture. Very original! I sort of see him as a easy, outgoing guy with a really good sense of humor. Sort of like a father to Inuyasha when he meets him, the one he never had. I see her dad as a happy guy who hardly ever gets angry, unless they could hurt themselves. Just a thought, you said you need help, although you were probably only looking for a name right? LOL. Anyways, great story, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 On: March 13, 2005 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo good..story so good..please update soon i had read your story from ff.net but since now i cant go..*points at somputer* i cant read it and i can only read it here..*cries* anywho..please update this fic soon on mmm.org and beofre i go i want to tell you that your a really great writer and dont ever stop writing E-mail me if you can!:Kagome0820@aol.com -Kagome0820
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 05:13 CDT
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i love this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!! and as for the dads name, i kinda like ryo (i'm getting bored with all the "k" names in the fanfics these days)
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Reviewed By: hyper_chick149 On: April 18, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow these are really good!! write the next chapter! you will write one wont you??? plz do or i will cry!!
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Reviewed By: aiko_zai On: April 15, 2004 22:39 CDT
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MUST WRITE MORE!!!I COMMAND YOU!
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Title: wonderful!
Reviewed By: Kenuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have done a wonderful job so far...keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Kagome's Dad's Name
Reviewed By: Kouga_Lover_3056 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Koji would be a good name for Kagome's father.. I don't know why but I've always liked that name... Well anyway great story so far! Sayonara!
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Reviewed By: tfc_angel_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story alot and hope you update soon. Also,Sesshoumaru's left arm was cut off and he lives in an elegant castle.
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Reviewed By: tfc_angel_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story alot and hope you update soon. Also,Sesshoumaru's left arm was cut off and he lives in an elegant castle.
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Reviewed By: keyoko On: April 09, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it very much can't wait to read the next one!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww only 4 reviews including mine!!! Your story deserves way more then that! The ear thing omg that was so cute! Please keep writing... maybe do the ear thing again! This is an awesome story i can't wait to find out what happens next! Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: sporty_gal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 18:23 CST
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this isn't such a bad story after all i actually enjoyed it:) At first i thought it was going to be an awful story. I think i would like to kno the rest of the story. plz continue
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Reviewed By: ko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story please update as soon as you can
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Reviewed By: Venom Injection On: February 01, 2004 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know a lot of people put 10/10 on everything, but I really mean it! This is such a good story, update soon!
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