| "Battle of the Breakers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: End.
Reviewed By: Kirby_Hiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah. That was the end. I thought it was pretty straight forward. I really didn't think an exact endding was needed. The general ending gives your mind something to think about. Though I could come up with one interesting secquile...
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Title: end?
Reviewed By: Little tiger On: April 24, 2004 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wondering ... How is the end ?? If this was the end i dont get it but i hope this is not the end cos i want to know what happend next. ( grammar bad for me)
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Reviewed By: Hentai Queen On: March 12, 2004 07:03 CST
Comment/Review:
cool! It's good! Continue to write.
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Reviewed By: foame369@yahoo.com On: March 04, 2004 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite an enjoyable fic, whichover sounding too much like a pervert.. and I am sincerely surprised nobody else has attempted sometrhing similar. You just watch the show for a while and you can easily tell Max has some sort of a crush on Kai, and of course gore and angst is always good. Wonderful fic overall, and I'm glad I clicked into it.
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