| "Paint it Black" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: eheh Fishsticks...
Reviewed By: Shinigami_Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 11:10 CDT
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This is such a halarious story. Trowa really is going to starve before they get anywhere. I cant wait to hear what is going to happen next. Besides that the style of writing is great, very humorous though some places such as the way characters or settngs look could use a bit more description. But thats just my opinion. Please get the rest of this story out soon!!! We all want to read what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: Enjen On: April 03, 2004 03:06 CST
Comment/Review:
do what happens next? update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Catra On: March 18, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, keep it up, I cant wait to see how you bring them all in and tie them all together. Well, ok, that is assuming you are going to bring in all the boys and tie them together. I like this story, and will look forward to more, More, MORE! >^^< ~
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Reviewed By: vashs_lil_jewell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! hope to read more!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Tuba On: March 06, 2004 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short chapters but still good and promising.
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Reviewed By: Devina On: March 06, 2004 05:46 CST
Comment/Review:
So dramatic *grin* 'trowa knew his fate was sealed' ^^ i liked it tho and i really hope to see another chap!
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Reviewed By: Catra On: February 16, 2004 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a little afraid at the start, but by the end I was ready for more, much more!!!!! Please dont keep us in suspense too long before posting more. Nice start so far. Catra
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Title: Paint it black
Reviewed By: Jarrod [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh. my. god.... even though the fic started off slow and cumbersom it still held me in its grasp and i found that i needed to continue and find out what would happen next... now i need to really know what will happen.... Please continue.... its really good
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Reviewed By: Hema San On: February 03, 2004 06:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Well it started nice enough. I Hope you keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Sheer Zan On: February 02, 2004 08:50 CST
Comment/Review:
oh you've started pretty cool(no wonder with that amount of snow there!). I hope to see more of it soon.
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Reviewed By: Devina On: February 01, 2004 22:58 CST
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cooooool! but what the hell is he doing in the snow (i have an idea who it is but im not sure XD)anyway i liked it and i really would just luf to see another chapie! so pretty pls update one soon? ^^ thnx!
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