| "Complicated" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 14:34 CDT
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what happened to saturday or sunday ne?
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Reviewed By: awsome2anime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:57 CST
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ignore red herring grammar doen't have to be perfect online and the storyline is hot
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Reviewed By: awsome2anime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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plz update soon
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Reviewed By: awsome2anime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Lorae On: June 03, 2005 17:44 CDT
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I'm wondering... Sakura? As Sakura Kinomoto?
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Reviewed By: DemonicBlood On: June 30, 2004 21:07 CDT
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What the fuck is wrong with this story?!? Why the hell would Kagome pair up with that half breed?! He already has that fuckin' corpse! He doesn't, I repeat DOESN'T deserve Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 10, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE PAIRINGS BUT PLEASEEEEEEEEEE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mamamia On: May 10, 2004 14:01 CDT
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awesome. sess/kag
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Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 10, 2004 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRING KOUGA INTO THE STORY SO HIM AND INUYASHA CAN FIGHT OVER KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WOULD BE FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 09, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'D VOTE FOR INUYASHA/KAGOME TO FALL IN LOVE AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MamaMia On: April 20, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:16 CDT
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iiiii loooooooove it please please update soon!?!?!
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Reviewed By: flamekitten19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 23:37 CDT
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if anyone is reading this, pass it by. i can't read my eviews unless i do this.
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Reviewed By: aznchuchi On: April 11, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg loved ur stori plz keep writing!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 14:04 CST
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I like it you do have me curious and don't worry what that flamer is doing. That person is doing the same to me so don't dignify this person's remarks okay. I think you have a great idea. The one thing I think you should do is maybe make them a little bit longer....not that I should talk because some of mine are short to...heh.....Anyway...keep it up okay?
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 14:30 CST
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0o0 *jaw drops* What was that? What was that horrible, despisable, confusing, erratic, gramatical horror? There were spelling mistakes abound, you didn't capitalize anyone's names, you didn't even capitalize at the beginning of a sentence! There was absolutely no scene description; It was like heads were floating in a black void with occational body parts popping up to interact with some props. I can't even identify what kind of perspective you're using. First it's omnipotent third, then I think at one point it went to intamite third. Just a note- you don't switch perspectives in the middle of the scene. //////////////////// Story-wise: You leave so many things out it's not even funny. First off- explain what the heck you were thinking bunping off a charmed sister to stick Kagome (an anime character) into the show (which happens to be actual acting). Did you realeze that you gave no explination for how Kagome knows them? She suddenly moves to San Francisco and barges into the house. How did she get there? How long did it take? How can you possibly think that Kagome is so flakey as to just up and leave the shard hunt? I mean, Naraku still has to die, the shards have to be found, and lives have to be saved. So not only is Kagome out of character, but so is Inuyasha, Kikyo, Sango, Miroku, and anyone else you put in there. I can't say much for the characters of charmed, just because I haven't seen more than five episodes, but still! You seriously have to stop putting this junk up. Now, just stop it. In fact, delete the whole thing. You'll be sparing people from the agony of reading it.
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Reviewed By: Mist's Sis On: February 09, 2004 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What she said! ^up there
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Reviewed By: MistRider On: February 09, 2004 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo GREAT GREAT GREAT. Why are you torturing me. Update! and thats an order! Make Inu Suffer for his bad disicion(i like inu/kag as a pairing). Update! dont make me come over there! @-'----
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