| "Gods Be With My Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: rezmanx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You guys are just brutal.. geez... Oh well.. i kinda liked it. Little bit unorganized jibba jabber... but it's alrizzle. ~Justin Nash~
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Reviewed By: Me On: September 21, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was a story buried behind all the bad grammar and bad structure- it was too hard to find to bother with reading.
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Reviewed By: Not MM.org member On: February 13, 2004 00:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Seperate paragraphs are good things, as are indents and other such cliches. When a reader goes to a story they don't want to have to work to read it. Don't get offended by this, that is not my intent, just correct the structural problems.
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