Reviewed By: MadHatterBlu On: January 16, 2005 22:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed your story. The world desperately needs more good YST fanfics. Especially ones starring Ryo *nope, no bias here ^_^ can't help it if he's the best*. Anyways, your spelling/grammar may need some work, but it doesn't detract from the story too much. Also, the pizza delivery twist was beautiful *insert evil grin*. I hope that you update soon, as I'm dying to know what fate will befall our favorite ronins. Email me at madhatterblu@hotmail.com when you do update next!!
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