| "Daddy" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: no_use_for_words [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 17:29 CST
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i have to agree with tomyo, but i loved to read. reminded me of shakespeare: in the end everybody dies :P. nah, just kidding. GREAT fic!
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Reviewed By: a-Leng [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was the third chapter that I thought was horrible because of the torture that Kai had to go through. I suppose that was just part of the plot I guess. Fortunately the story improved from the fourth chapter onwards and the ending was satisfying. Still, to be honest I didn't quite enjoy reading this story. But hey, check out your other reviews, a lot of them have praised your fic. So good for you.
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Reviewed By: tomyo On: May 04, 2004 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that has to be one of the sadist things i have ever read it was so cool. i never eexpected anything like the end. i really liked it and cryed at the end it is a very sad, unhappy, and Anguishy end. well done.
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: I luv Kai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Kai torture! YAY! Sorry it took me so long to review this.... Love it! Can't believe I nearly didn't read this! It rocks, sreiously. Update soon please! ^^
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Reviewed By: a-Leng [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was just a bit boring and I don't understand how one male is meant to enter another male. It just doesn't make sense.
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Reviewed By: Cor Cor On: February 21, 2004 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was so sad. You should write more. I love hearing about Kie or kei or however the hell you spell his name.
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Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: February 18, 2004 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as i like te seeming Tala/Kai pairing, this is really sick. Since Kai is my favorite character it sort of makes this fic really wrong. Please stop torturing Kai. //looks up with kawaii watery eyes.//
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Title: game girl
Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not vary good at righting reviews but I like it so far and please get the next ch. up ASAP :)
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